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    • I my English class I was given Homework:”Imagine that you are a famous writer.Your book has become the best-selling one of all time.ell me briefly what is your novel about.
    • At least 150 words.” Check this text please : The Adventures of the Moon The book intendet for Children and their Parents.
    • The cute child Story tell about a Coaruge and a bravery Puppy Moon ,about her cheerful and exciting Adventures.
    • Moon is Dalmatian with difrent eyes and cheerful temper.
    • Here Moon meets with amazing and terrible Peoples, acquire real friends and win enemies.
    • A Wonderful Story is about a love, a betrayal,a real friendship and a loyalty.
    • I write this Book with huge Love to all Animals.I want to be in our World have more Love,to we become good to loved ones,to friends,to four-legged friends of man.
    • I hope :people’s understand -dogs ,cats, Hamsters, Turtles and all the rest can’t speek,but They capable of think,feel,joy and love.
    • They very much love people’s and ready for a person on any feats!

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    • I my English class I was given Homework:”Imagine that you are a famous writer.Your book has become the best-selling one of all time.ell me briefly what is your novel about.
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    • In my English class I was given Ha homework: assignment: ”Imagine that you are a famous writer. Your book has become the best-selling one of all time. Tell me briefly what is your novel is about.
    • In my English class I was given Ha homework: ”Imagine that you are a famous writer. Your book has become the best-selling one of all time. Tell me briefly what is your novel is about.
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    • At least 150 words.” Check this text please : The Adventures of the Moon The book intendet for Children and their Parents.
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    • AWrite at least 150 words.” Check this text please :¶



      The Adventures of the Moon


      The book intendet
      for Children and their Parents.
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    • The cute child Story tell about a Coaruge and a bravery Puppy Moon ,about her cheerful and exciting Adventures.
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    • The cute child Story tell about a Coaruge and a bravery Puppy courageous puppy named Moon ,and about her cheerful and exciting Aadventures.
    • The cute child Story tells about a Coaruge and aurageous, bravery Puppy Moon ,called Moon, and it’s about ther cheerful and exciting Aadventures.
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    • I write this Book with huge Love to all Animals.I want to be in our World have more Love,to we become good to loved ones,to friends,to four-legged friends of man.
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    • I write this Bbook with huge Llove tofor all Aanimals. I want to be in our World haveour world to be filled with more Llove ,to we become good to our loved ones, to our friends,to and to our four-legged friends of man.
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    • I hope :people’s understand -dogs ,cats, Hamsters, Turtles and all the rest can’t speek,but They capable of think,feel,joy and love.
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    • I hope :that people’s will understand - that dogs ,cats, Hhamsters, Tturtles, and all the restothers can’t speeak, but Theyare capable of think,feel,ing as well as feeling joy and love.
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