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Text from vaness182 - English

  • Today.

    • Today is December 20th, this morning I took a shower and went an appointment.
    • When I came back at home I lie down, saw the t.v. and called a Xiomy; I needed a hug, I was sad and tired.
    • At noon, My mommy called us for lunch, I don't wanted eat, Xiomy took my lunch and brought to my bed.
    • Always, and today she feed me, she took a spoon and gave me the soup. she pamper me.
    • When I felt better, play music on the cellphone and, I did my favorite thing, draw, I drew my eniripsa (backwards = aspirine) is a little fairy.
    • I like draw it, but when I saw and don't like something, I like try draw again it.
    • Later, at night, We get together with our parents for to go to see the lighting of town.
    • My parents and her parents have a good relationship, she stays on my apartment when she wants, and I stay on her apartment when I want.

МОЛЯ, ПОМОГНЕТЕ ДА КОРИГИГИРАМЕ ВСЯКО ИЗРЕЧЕНИЕ! - English