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- Surprise baby
- I would like to give her a present, but I don’t know what she wants.
- I know that she loves green t-shirts, maybe this can be a good idea, but her closet has a lot of them.
- At the end, women like flowers, maybe I give flowers, it would be easy choice for me.

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- Surprise baby
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- ”Surprise, baby!” / A surprise for my sweetheart / a gift for my girlfriend
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- I would like to give her a present, but I don’t know what she wants.
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- I would like to give her a present, but I don’t know what she ~~want~~likes.
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- I would like to give her a present, but I don’t know what she w~~ants~~ould prefer.
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- I know that she loves green t-shirts, maybe this can be a good idea, but her closet has a lot of them.
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- I know that she loves green t-shirts~~, maybe t~~. This can be a good idea, but sher has a closet ~~has a lot of~~full of them, already. / This would be a great idea if her closet wasn't already overflowing with them.
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- I know that she loves green t-shirts, maybe this can be a good idea, but she~~r closet~~ has a lots of them in her closet.
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- At the end, women like flowers, maybe I give flowers, it would be easy choice for me.
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- ~~At the end, w~~Finally, I thought about flowers. Women like flowers~~, m~~. Maybe I will give her flowers~~, i~~ / I will probably offer her flowers: that would be an easy choice for me / flowers would be a good choice / a safe choice / a sensible choice.
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- AtIn the end, women like flowers, so maybe I give her flowers, it would be an easy choice for me.
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Surprise baby

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