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  • Living In a foreign country

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    • When we discuss the subject of living in a foreign country that speaks a different language than yours, we found an argument between people.
    • Some people believe that living with people who speak another language might put you in danger due to language barriers.
  • I find this viewpoint is respectable and convincing to some extent.
    • For example, a friend of mine, travelled to the United States of America to study master there, said to me on first weekend he decided to go on picnic trip to climb a mountain, there he met an american young man who asked him what he is doing, my friend said he is a terrorist instead of saying he is a tourist, my friend noticed signs of panic on the face of that man, but at that time he did not know why.
    • If you live in a foreign country and you have children this might expose them to bullying as a result of discrimination, this might cause psychological problems for them that affect their health and future.
    • Adding to all these problems, the probability of getting a good job is weak, because of the language barrier, you could not get the job that suits with your qualification.
    • In summary, I agree that living in a foreign country has cons superceddes other bros.
    • Especially now as a result of spread of culture of populisation, hatred and Islamaphobia.
    • That living in a foreign country not but your future on danger but your live too.
    • When we watch television, we could see many examples that approve that.

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    • When we discuss the subject of living in a foreign country that speaks a different language than yours, we found an argument between people.
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    • When we discussed the subject of living in a foreign country that speaks a different language than yours, we found an argument dispute between people.
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    • Some people believe that living with people who speak another language might put you in danger due to language barriers.
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    • Some people believe that living with people who speak another language might put youa language barrier ins danger due to language barrierous.
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    • For example, a friend of mine, travelled to the United States of America to study master there, said to me on first weekend he decided to go on picnic trip to climb a mountain, there he met an american young man who asked him what he is doing, my friend said he is a terrorist instead of saying he is a tourist, my friend noticed signs of panic on the face of that man, but at that time he did not know why.
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    • For example, a friend of mine, travelled to the United States of America to study for their masters there, and said to me onthat on the first weekend he decided to go on a picnic trip to climb a mountain, there he met an a. He met a young American young man who asked him what he iwas doing, m. My friend said he is a terrorist instead of saying he is a tourist, my friend noticed signs of panic on the face of that man, but at that time he did not know why.
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    • If you live in a foreign country and you have children this might expose them to bullying as a result of discrimination, this might cause psychological problems for them that affect their health and future.
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    • If you livehave children in a foreign country and you have children this might expose them to bullying as a result of discrimination, t. This might cause them further psychological problems for themdamage that affects their health and future.
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    • Adding to all these problems, the probability of getting a good job is weak, because of the language barrier, you could not get the job that suits with your qualification.
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    • Adding to all theose problems, the probability of getting a good job is wmeakger, because of the language barrier, you could not get the job that suits with yourmight not be considered qualificationed.
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