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  • Improvements on the city hospital

    • Notice: I want corrections only from a native English speaker ------------------------ We have here two maps for a city hospital, the first came back to 2007, and the second to 2010 after some developments have happened.
  • When we look at the hospital map in 2007, we clearly see a ring road circling the city hospital, which connected to the city road through the hospital road.
  • On the west and east of the hospital road, there were bus stops, and there is also a car park used by staff and the public.
    • The car park has an access to the ring road.
    • While in 2010, we notice that some changes have been made, we see that there two roundabouts have been constructed, the first connecting the hospital road to the ring road, while the second connecting it to the city road.
  • These roundabouts have sub-roads leading to a bus station that has been built on the west of the hospital road.
    • The previous car park used by staff and the public now is used just by staff because a new public car park has been built eastern the city hospital, adjacent to the ring road which has an independent access to the ring road.

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    • Notice: I want corrections only from a native English speaker ------------------------ We have here two maps for a city hospital, the first came back to 2007, and the second to 2010 after some developments have happened.
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    • When we look at the hospital map in 2007, we clearly see a ring road circling the city hospital, which connected to the city road through the hospital road.
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    • While in 2010, we notice that some changes have been made, we see that there two roundabouts have been constructed, the first connecting the hospital road to the ring road, while the second connecting it to the city road.
      Vote now!
    • While iIn 2010, we notice that some changes have been made, w. We see that there two roundabouts have been constructed, the first connecting the hospital road to the ring road, whileand the second connecting it to the city road.
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    • The previous car park used by staff and the public now is used just by staff because a new public car park has been built eastern the city hospital, adjacent to the ring road which has an independent access to the ring road.
      Vote now!
    • The previous car park used by staff and the public now is used just by staff because a new public car park has been built to the eastern of the city hospital, adjacent to the ring road, which has an independent access to the ring road.
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