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Text from massimo_it - English

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    • I was bored in the Maths lesson.
  • I raised my hand and asked to to go out to the bathroom, to pee.
    • I’ve headed for the place.
    • When I came in I noticed that the window wasn’t locked.
  • So, I opened the window and climbed out through it.
    • I’ve walked around for a spell.
    • Then, someone came to answer the call of nature too .
    • I decided to wait for a while when suddenly I heard the lock to snap up.
  • The things looked blue.
  • I had to get back inside.
  • I even didn’t consider the return through the main entrance.
  • The door woman would ask for the pass or ask my homeroom teacher why I was out.
  • The teacher would tell that to my parents and I’d have been smacked at home.
  • I walked straight to the emergency exits to check if any was open.
  • Unfortunately, I had no luck.
  • I couldn’t be lost in the crowd of other students for it was in the middle of a class.
  • Finally, I was forced to come to the main entrance and pass the door woman.
  • Fortunately, she didn’t ask me any relevant questions.
    • On my way to the Maths class I had been met by another teacher who asked me why I wasn’t in the classroom.
  • I told her that I went to the bathroom.
  • However, somehow, she managed to bust me when I was climbing of the window.
  • So, she sent me to the principal’s office where the principal told me off and sent to the classroom.
  • My mom rebuked me and locked me up at home.
    • I often get bored to death in the classes.
    • So, sometimes I do random things and adults disapprove them.

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