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Text from AngeloFRN - English

    • If I were rich

  • I’m Italian, but thanks to my business I became very rich.
  • Now I live in Long Beach, a city in Los Angeles County, California.
  • In Long Beach there are a lot of bars, restaurants, coffee shops, and parks.
  • One of the top neighborhoods in Long Beach is Bellmont Heights.
  • Here there are two historic districts.
  • The boundaries on the north, Nieto on the east, Redondo Avenue to the west and Livingston, where I live, to the south.
    • This is a material world with a lot of material girls.
    • Experience has made me rich, so now I would like a girl who is very independent, not relying on me and my credit cards for what she wants.
  • I want a particularly good person in a romantic relationship and to live together in this paradise.

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