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  • These days a lot of people prefer to be self-employed, rather than work for a company or organization.
    • This trend has many reasons, which in the seventies and the nineties approximately, half of the world countries were under communist regimes or social systems that are similar to the communist system, that the states forbid people from setting up their entrepreneurship.
    • Nowadays, due to globalization and the freedom of trade, many people took the risk and began building their own business, many of them succeeded.
    • Those successful people ignite the passion in ambitious people to make their future by setting up their own business.
    • Because working on your own has many advantages, one of them you have your freedom that there is no one you need his or her permission to go on vacation or force you to do complex tasks you do not like to do.
    • There is also an opportunity to grow your business and become a millionaire or billionaire.
    • Because when you work as self-employed, you work assiduously.
    • But this not mean all things are good, to be self-employed there are drawbacks too.
    • Sometimes you fail, which might lead to losing all your money and getting bankrupt.
    • Because to be successful self-employed needs many necessary things, a good economic environment to start with, that means the country where you set up your business in should has suitable legislations that facilitate your work as self-employed.
    • Also you should have many skills in marketing, public relations and human resources management, because sometimes you do not have the money to employ specialists in thiese fields that you do all work yourself that needs these skills.
    • In summary, to be self-employed is tempting, but needs good conditions, relevant skills and hardworking.

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    • This trend has many reasons, which in the seventies and the nineties approximately, half of the world countries were under communist regimes or social systems that are similar to the communist system, that the states forbid people from setting up their entrepreneurship.
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    • Nowadays, due to globalization and the freedom of trade, many people took the risk and began building their own business, many of them succeeded.
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    • Nowadays, due to globalization and the freedom of trade, many people took the risks and began building their own business, mes. Many of them succeeded.
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    • Because working on your own has many advantages, one of them you have your freedom that there is no one you need his or her permission to go on vacation or force you to do complex tasks you do not like to do.
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    • Because wWorking on your own has many advantages, one of themfor example, you have yourthe freedom that there is no one you need his or her permission to go on vacation oro go on vacation when you like, and no one will force you to do complex tasks you do not like to do.
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    • Because to be successful self-employed needs many necessary things, a good economic environment to start with, that means the country where you set up your business in should has suitable legislations that facilitate your work as self-employed.
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    • Because to be successfully self-employed, one needs many necessary things,; a good economic environment to start with, t. That means the country where you set up your business in should hasve suitable legislations that facilitates your work as self-employed.
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    • Also you should have many skills in marketing, public relations and human resources management, because sometimes you do not have the money to employ specialists in thiese fields that you do all work yourself that needs these skills.
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    • Also you should have many skills in marketing, public relations and human resources management, because sometimes you do not have the money to employ specialists in thiese fields thatand you will have to do all the work yourself that needthat requires these skills yourself.
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