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Text from henrique-rafael - English

    • Girl’s Secret

    • She tell me a secret, something really innocent, for me at list, but in her’s mind I think it’s a big one secret.
    • Sometimes I think the size of secret depends of you, I mean, every one give their own importance to the same situation, some people think the secret are big and others think the secret are not big.

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  • Sentence 1
    • She tell me a secret, something really innocent, for me at list, but in her’s mind I think it’s a big one secret.
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    • She tells me a secret, something really innocent, for me at list, but in her’s mind I think it’s a big one secret.
    • She tellold me a secret, something really innocent, -- for me, at list, but in her’s mindeast. // ... something that sounded innocent to me. But, I think it’s a big one secret.that, in her mind, it was an important one / ... it was a serious matter / a sensitive issue.
    • She tellold me a secret, s. Something really innocent, for me at lieast, but in her’s mind I think it’s aone big one secret.
    • She tellold me a secret, something really innocent, for me at lieast, but in her’s mind, I think it’s a big one secret.
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  • Sentence 2
    • Sometimes I think the size of secret depends of you, I mean, every one give their own importance to the same situation, some people think the secret are big and others think the secret are not big.
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    • Sometimes I think the sizI think / I believe that sometimes, the importance of a secret depends ofn you,. I mean, every one givehas their own importance to the sameperspective of a situation, ; some people (might) think the secret are big and othersy are hiding a deep secret / a dark secret, while others (might) think their secrets are not that big.
    • Sometimes I think the sizimportance of secret depends of you, I mean, ethe individual. Every persone gives their own importance to the same situation, and some people may think thea secret areis big andwhile others may think thea secret areis not as big.
    • Sometimes I think the size of secret depends of you,. I mean, every one gives their own importance to the same situation, s. Some people think the secret areis big and others think the secret areis not so big.
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