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    • Increasing the price is the best way to solve growing traffic a

  • Traffic congestion is always a fundamental problem in most countries, especially in a huge bustling metropolis.
    • In the hectic pace of life, the residents getting stuck in heavily congested streets where the traffic tails back for kilometers.
  • Moreover, the volume of traffic on the roads has increased dramatically in recent years.
  • And this subject would bring about air pollution and its associated problems, global warming, increasing greenhouse effect, and ozone layer depletion.
    • So, this matter is vitally important.
    • Traffic jam is a growing concern for every government.
  • The governments should bring in policies for this serious problem.
  • In my opinion, increasing the price of petrol is not the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.
    • This solution is not not only logical but also effective.
  • There are several solutions to this problem.
  • The best solution for a poor traffic system provided with a well-organized public transportation system or sufficient public transportation.
    • People usually suffer from lack of well-organized public transportation system.
  • On the other hand, a viable alternative for traffic jam and air pollution is riding a bike.
  • Encouraging more the dwellers to ride bicycles would be good for their health and it is an environment-friendly mode of transportation.
  • There are several ways to encourage citizens to use bicycles rather than other means of transportation, such as building cycle-ways, bike parking, and providing safe cycle training to ensure they have enough facilities.
  • For example, the inhabitants of my city have been deprived of cycle-friendly routes.
  • In conclusion, I think the government should not increase the price of petrol illogically and unreasonably.
  • It is necessary to pursue an effective solution.
  • It is heavily dependent on government policies.

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