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    • The Passion of Music

    • Some people believe that music is a better tool we could use to remove barriers between people from different background, cultures, and generations.
    • When we look at this viewpoint, we find it convincible .
    • Because our current world becomes one village, but at the same time has different cultures.
    • In which we have more than live six thousand languages.
    • We also have issues between some countries due to differences of cultures and other problems that made obstacles between these people.
  • For example, in my country, Libya,we faced political problems in the Nineties with the United states of America.
  • As a result of our previous regime’s policies, that led to sanctions on my country.
    • I remember that most Libyan people were dissatisfied with the United States as a political system, and I saw clearly that some young people were angry with American culture, Which boycott campaigns of American products proliferated.
  • Boycott for productions such as Cars, Clothes.
  • Many fast foods restaurants that served Hamburgers closed.
  • Except for American songs.
    • I remember a lot of young people were fans of Michael Jhoksn.
  • That period proved that music could exceed cultural differences.
  • Another advantage in the music was that we did not need to interpret it.
  • When we listen to songs from different languages, we could enjoy listening to music even though we do not know the meaning of the lyrics.
  • Music has the power to overcome the difference between ages.
    • For example, my favourite Singer is the same Singer my father is fan of.
    • Although me and my father from different generations.
    • In summary, I definitely agree that nothing could bring people from different cultures and ages together than music.

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