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Text from shin1900 - English

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    • I am a person who loves studying languages. i know English, Spanish, French and Portuguese.
    • I have studied latin, the original mother tongue that derived in the romance languages and influenced the grammar of germanic languages such as english.
    • I am a lawyer and i have worked the field for 15 years. i have been learning the english language since i was 7 years old.
    • My secondary school title is specialized in languages.
    • As a lawyer i had to master the use of spanish so that i can better help my clients.
    • I am well versed in authors like Miguel de Cervantes, Gabriel Garcia Marquez, and Jorge Luis Borges, not only reading them, but understanding their motivations, their sources, their passions.
    • They all share in common that they were influenced by their life experiences and their time periods.
    • I have been studying syntactical analysis, i needed to use it frequently to translate latin.
    • For these reasons i would like to expand my grasp of the english language and the promotion of spanish by teaching it.
    • I am more than capable of teaching it, since my education was specialized in spanish grammar and literature.
  • In order to understand a language , one needs to study its history, and its classics.
  • I chose the United States of America to work as a teacher for the following reasons: 1) The United States is a country worldwide known for the quality of its schools and its educational level, and a place of the influx of various communities of all around the world.
    • 2) I have read about american culture and i know they are highly educated, respectful, responsible, organized and disciplined people.
  • I would like to have the opportunity to learn and adopt the best of their values.
    • 3) The state of California, historically had a link to the spanish language and culture for more than 400 years, it is close to mexico and has been heavily influenced by it.
    • 4) Argentina has many similarities with the United States, they share the same ideals of democracy, freedom, equality. they both were imperial colonies, and they both got their independence after a long struggle.
    • I have visited the country as a tourist, and got to know various cities such as San Francisco, Los Angeles, Honolulu, Las Vegas, Seattle, Anchorage, and i had witnessed the kindness of its people, which gives me the security of knowing a little about the environment in which i will be working and i am completely sure that i will be able to successfully integrate there.

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    • I have studied latin, the original mother tongue that derived in the romance languages and influenced the grammar of germanic languages such as english.
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    • I have studied latin,; the original mother tongue that derived in the romance languages and influenced the grammar of germanic languages such as english.
    • I have studied latin, the original mother tongue that derived infrom which the romance languages andderive, and which has influenced the grammar of germanic languages such as english.
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    • I am a lawyer and i have worked the field for 15 years. i have been learning the english language since i was 7 years old.
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    • I am a lawyer and iI have worked in the field for 15 years. iI have been learning the eEnglish language since iI was 7 years old.
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    • I am well versed in authors like Miguel de Cervantes, Gabriel Garcia Marquez, and Jorge Luis Borges, not only reading them, but understanding their motivations, their sources, their passions.
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    • I am well versed in authors like Miguel de Cervantes, Gabriel Garcia Marquez, and Jorge Luis Borges, n. Not only reading them, but understanding their motivations, their sources, theirand passions.
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    • I chose the United States of America to work as a teacher for the following reasons: 1) The United States is a country worldwide known for the quality of its schools and its educational level, and a place of the influx of various communities of all around the world.
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    • 2) I have read about american culture and i know they are highly educated, respectful, responsible, organized and disciplined people.
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    • 2) I have read about athe American culture and iI know they are highly educated, respectful, responsible, organized and disciplined people.
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    • 3) The state of California, historically had a link to the spanish language and culture for more than 400 years, it is close to mexico and has been heavily influenced by it.
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    • 3) The state of California, historically had a link to the sSpanish language and culture for more than 400 years, i. It is close to mMexico and has been heavily influenced by it.
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    • 4) Argentina has many similarities with the United States, they share the same ideals of democracy, freedom, equality. they both were imperial colonies, and they both got their independence after a long struggle.
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    • 4) Argentina has many similarities with the United States,: they share the same ideals of democracy, freedom, equality.; they both werewere both imperial colonies, and they both got their independence after a long struggle.
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    • I have visited the country as a tourist, and got to know various cities such as San Francisco, Los Angeles, Honolulu, Las Vegas, Seattle, Anchorage, and i had witnessed the kindness of its people, which gives me the security of knowing a little about the environment in which i will be working and i am completely sure that i will be able to successfully integrate there.
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    • I have visited the country as a tourist, and got to know various cities such as San Francisco, Los Angeles, Honolulu, Las Vegas, Seattle, Anchorage, and iI hadve witnessed the kindness of its people, which gives me the security of knowing a little about the environment in which iI will be working and iI am completely sure that iI will be able to successfully integrate there. ¶
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