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  • Presentation

  • Hi, new friend!
    • My name’s Lucas, I’m geography teacher in the public school of São Paulo, I’m 28 years old, I’m communicative, patient and I like learn other cultures and languages.
    • My focus now is improve my level in English, because I need a good scory on the exam TOEFL.
    • Getting a good score, I can apply for coleges/universities and my dream is to do an graduation or master’s degree in other country.
    • How do you know, the situation of my country, because the pandemic and government Bolsonaro, it’s terrible, many people are dying.
  • Anyway, I hope things get better and I would very much like you to help me with my English.
  • Thanks and have a good day! Bye Bye!

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