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    • The Victory District in Lima is one of the cities that has one of the most important changes in recent years compared to years before 2019 .
    • The biggest change is with respect to informality in the Gamarra shopping center, now the  majority of sellers in a store inside the buildings, before you could see people selling on the sidewalks, now things are different .
    • Another important change is the decrease in crime within this district, while in the past everyone was afraid to leave their homes for fear of being robbed, today citizens are safer in their district.

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  • Sentence 1
    • The Victory District in Lima is one of the cities that has one of the most important changes in recent years compared to years before 2019 .
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    • The Victory District in Lima is one of the cities that has one ofhas seen the most important changes in recent years, compared to the years before 2019 .
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  • Sentence 2
    • The biggest change is with respect to informality in the Gamarra shopping center, now the  majority of sellers in a store inside the buildings, before you could see people selling on the sidewalks, now things are different .
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    • The biggest change is with respect to informality i. In the Gamarra shopping center, now the  majority of sellers in aretailers now sell from stores inside the buildings, b. Before you could see people selling on the sidewalks, n. Now things are different .
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  • Sentence 3
    • Another important change is the decrease in crime within this district, while in the past everyone was afraid to leave their homes for fear of being robbed, today citizens are safer in their district.
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    • Another important change is the decrease in crime within thise district, w. While in the past everyone was afraid to leave their homes for fear of being robbed, today citizens are safer in their district. ¶
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