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  • Traffic congestion

    • personality-wise, Tehran nowadays has become a huge bustling metropolis.
  • It is not only crowded but also lively.
    • These things bring about the traffic tails back for kilometers.
  • In addition, Tehran’s streets are heavily congested.
    • We are usually bumper to bumper in a traffic jam.
    • The volume of traffic on the roads has increased dramatically in recent years.
    • When it comes to traffic congestion, the first thing that many people think about it is the delay.
  • Thousands of daily commuters pour into the city every day.
  • Heavily congested streets can make people late for work.
    • In the afternoon rush hour is again because the workday is done and people want to get home to relax and traffic is preventing it.
  • The second thing is higher fuel consumption and pollution.
    • In fact, the devastating impact of traffic congestion would bring about global warming, increasing greenhouse effect, and ozone layer depletion.

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