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    • I wrote a little story of mine. Could you correct it?

    • I was thinking my old camp story yesterday.
    • It is a good story to tell, so I am telling this to you guys.
    • I was in 7th grade when I went to a camp with my friends and teachers.
    • One day one of our teachers came our classroom, and he said “ We planned a camping activity.
    • If you want to attend this, your parents must fill the permission paper.”.
    • After the announcement, we talked about going camping with each other.
  • My close friends and others decided to go.
    • Then, I decided to go too.
    • Everyone prepared a bag for the camp.
    • Bags were generally filled with snacks and camping tools.
    • I also add some extra caffeine supplied coffee for the night.
    • We started our journey.
    • While we were travelling, we were playing a roleplaying game on my phone.
    • And the game’s theme was to find who is a werewolf among us.
    • The campsite was in another city, and we passed on mountains.
    • They were very beautiful, and we arrived our campsite nearby a lake.
    • Although the campsite was like a hole among the mountains.
    • When we arrived, our first task was to prepare our tents.
    • So, one of our teachers started to build up a tent for showing how we can prepare our tents.
    • But I was hearing a wolf’s howl!
    • My friend said that can I hear the wolf’s howl.
    • I said that I can.
    • After a little frightening, I realized the sound coming from my pocket.
    • I said, “ I found the wolf.
    • It is inside of my pocket” to my friend.
    • We were both smiled(another part might come next Sunday).

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