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- Hi
- I'm Gabrielly and i'm from Brasil.
- I would like to learn to write and speak English, I can help them with Portuguese, can someone help me?

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- Hi
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- Hi!
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- I'm Gabrielly and i'm from Brasil.
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- I'm Gabrielly and i'm from Brasil.¶you can add me on facebook https://www.facebook.com/idrisomergulle
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- I'm Gabrielly ~~and i'm~~, from Braszil.
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- I would like to learn to write and speak English, I can help them with Portuguese, can someone help me?
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- I would like to learn how to write and speak English, I can help ~~them~~you with Portuguese, can someone help me?
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- I would like to learn how to write and speak English, I can help them with Portuguese, can someone help me?...¶¶I can help you... Help me, with portuguese ?
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