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Hello! I’m Nastya.
Hello! I’m Nastya.
I’m 12 years old.
I want to tell about me.
I don’t like doing dangerous sports.
I would like to do a parachute jump but I’m afraid.
I would like for my birthday cosmetics and a box for her.
I would like to go on holiday in the sea(Maldives) this year.
I would like to visit Maldives , Anapa, Sochi because I love the sun and I want to go to the sea.
That’s all about me!

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