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Сообщение от johnask - English

  • Amazonia part 2

    • Moreover this deforestation does not penalize only Men.
  • Animals also suffer from this degradation, especially those living in this forest.
  • Indeed, as quoted in the article, in 1 hectare of this forest we find 160 species of birds, 10 species of primates, 44 types of fish, 33 species of amphibians, 310 species of trees, 1 billion invertebrates, 22 types of reptiles, 96 types of epiphytes.
    • And I want to remind you that the Amazon covers more than 500 million hectares.
    • All these species are in danger and this mainly because of Man. At the end of the article, we hear about an increase in the number of diseases.
  • This is also a danger that threatens us all.
  • Indeed, some studies link deforestation to an increase in mosquito-related disease: in particular leishmaniasis and malaria, which are parasitic diseases that can be very dangerous and especially very deadly.
  • And more generally, because of this deforestation and the destruction of trees and the increase in CO2 emissions, the rise in temperatures that could be more than 8 degrees in the forest could lead to a migration of insects and animals vectors of diseases towards the cities and therefore contaminate the Man. It is true that this article is intended to be defeatist and alarming, but today the world is gradually becoming aware of this danger and there are now politicians and associations that are taking action to combat this danger.
    • Conclusion: In short, deforestation is a global problem and challenge with many impacts, whether economic, social, environmental or even vital.
    • In spite of many actions and awareness, there are still great efforts to be made by every Man on earth.
  • Finally, we wanted to explain why we decided to present this topic.
    • Indeed, today, global warming is impacting us all and this in large part because of deforestation and we wanted to explain this to you because this topic is particularly important to us.
  • Thank you for listening.

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