Korekty

Text from cris_velaz - English

    • LETTER FOR STUDY APPLICATION

  • Hello, my name is Cristian Velazco and through this letter I want to express my interest in obtaining a study permit in Canada.
    • I was recently accepted into the ILAC INTERNATIONAL COLLEGE VANCOUVER to be able to study in 2021 the Essentials for Business diploma program, which lasts 40 weeks.
    • In which I am interested because it helps me improve my career and professional development.
    • I am an architect, I currently live in Valle de Bravo and work during the week for an office dedicated to the design and construction of residential homes, in the creative and interior design department since 2018.
    • Fines of weeks I work with my grandmother who owns a company that offers tourist packages, as well as boat and sailboat rentals for tourists who visit the city.
    • In recent years Valle de Bravo and its tourist offer has grown considerably as has my grandmother’s company and we have found the work situation for groups of more people.
    • In the city where I live, an annual world paragliding championship is organized, which has generated a greater demand for the company’s services with mostly English-speaking foreigners, which has led my grandmother to think about improving our service.
    • That is why you applied to study the Service Essentials for Business Diploma program at ILAC INTERNATIONAL COLLEGE VANCOUVER.
  • That would help me improve my English skills and would allow me to learn about the necessary skills to be able to manage the company’s customer service.
    • And that I also think that it will give me a plus to my career as an architect since it will deal with clients is one of my tasks in my job in the architecture office.
    • I appreciate your time and consideration in advance, if you have any additional questions, do not hesitate to contact me at +52 1442 787 6604 or via e-mail crisvela12@outloo.com

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English

  • Tytuł
  • Zdanie 1
    • Hello, my name is Cristian Velazco and through this letter I want to express my interest in obtaining a study permit in Canada.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 1DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 1
  • Zdanie 2
    • I was recently accepted into the ILAC INTERNATIONAL COLLEGE VANCOUVER to be able to study in 2021 the Essentials for Business diploma program, which lasts 40 weeks.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • I was recently accepted into the ILAC INTERNATIONAL COLLEGE VANCOUVER to be able to study in 2021 for the Essentials for Business diploma program, which lasts 40 weeks.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 2DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 2
  • Zdanie 3
  • Zdanie 4
    • I am an architect, I currently live in Valle de Bravo and work during the week for an office dedicated to the design and construction of residential homes, in the creative and interior design department since 2018.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • I am an architect,. I currently live in Valle de Bravo and work during the week for an office dedicated to the design and construction of residential homes, in the creative and interior design department since 2018.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 4DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 4
  • Zdanie 5
    • Fines of weeks I work with my grandmother who owns a company that offers tourist packages, as well as boat and sailboat rentals for tourists who visit the city.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • Fines of weeks I work with my grandmother who owns a company that offers tourist packages, as well as boat and sailboat rentals for tourists who visit the city.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5
  • Zdanie 6
    • In recent years Valle de Bravo and its tourist offer has grown considerably as has my grandmother’s company and we have found the work situation for groups of more people.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • In recent years Valle de Bravo and its tourist offerm has grown considerably as has my grandmother's company, and we have found the work situation for groups of more people.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6
  • Zdanie 7
    • In the city where I live, an annual world paragliding championship is organized, which has generated a greater demand for the company’s services with mostly English-speaking foreigners, which has led my grandmother to think about improving our service.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • In the city where I live, an annual world paragliding championship is organized, which has generated a greater demand for the company’s services with mostly English-speaking foreigners, which. This has led my grandmother to think about improving our service.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 7DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 7
  • Zdanie 8
  • Zdanie 9
    • That would help me improve my English skills and would allow me to learn about the necessary skills to be able to manage the company’s customer service.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9
  • Zdanie 10
    • And that I also think that it will give me a plus to my career as an architect since it will deal with clients is one of my tasks in my job in the architecture office.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • And that I also think that it will give me a plus to my career as an architect since it willI deal with clients ias one of my tasks in my job in the architecture office.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 10DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 10
  • Zdanie 11
    • I appreciate your time and consideration in advance, if you have any additional questions, do not hesitate to contact me at +52 1442 787 6604 or via e-mail crisvela12@outloo.com
      Głosuj teraz!
    • I appreciate your time and consideration in advance, i. If you have any additional questions, do not hesitate to contact me at +52 1442 787 6604 or via e-mail crisvela12@outloo.com.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 11DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 11