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  • learning in groups is the best way to learn

  • When it comes to learning, there are several ways to learn, but in my opinion learning in groups is the best way to learn.
  • Some people may disagree with this and they prefer to learn just by themselves, but I have my reasons to convince them.
    • The first reason is that learning in groups help you to be more confident.
    • Because you can listen to all point of view and compare yours with them.
  • Also, psychologists have proven that discussing your point of view with others improves your speaking skills.
  • The second reason is that learning in groups gives you more information.
    • For example, everyone shares what he has from information and you may not know about this information, so you gain new information to your knowledge.
    • The third reason is that getting information from your groups or friends is more easier and interesting.
    • For instance, your friends and you can understand each other because you are in the same age.
    • Therefore, when you do not understand something or point from the subject your friends will explain that to you better than any other learning resources such as YouTube.
  • To sum up, we can understand from all the reasons above that learning in groups is the most effective method to learn.

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    • When it comes to learning, there are several ways to learn, but in my opinion learning in groups is the best way to learn.
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    • Some people may disagree with this and they prefer to learn just by themselves, but I have my reasons to convince them.
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    • For example, everyone shares what he has from information and you may not know about this information, so you gain new information to your knowledge.
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    • For example, everyone shares what he has from informationwhat he knows and you may not know about this information, so you gain new information to your knowledgelearn something new.
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    • Therefore, when you do not understand something or point from the subject your friends will explain that to you better than any other learning resources such as YouTube.
      투표하세요!
    • Therefore, when you do not understand something or a point from thea subject then your friends will explain that to you better than any other learning resources such as YouTube.
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    • To sum up, we can understand from all the reasons above that learning in groups is the most effective method to learn.
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