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    • Hello, i’m emily im from Indonesia I want to share my story with you guys about my experience in learning english.
    • I’ve been learning english since 4 years old.
    • I loved to learn this language because it was fun for me to be able to speak more than only our mother tongue.
    • And the time comes, when i was at the 3rd grade of junior high school, i got a fierce english teacher and was made afraid of her.
    • So i became a lazy student to learn english, aftermath my score was below average.
    • This experience is really giving a huge effect for me, i always have no confidence to speak and write english.
    • So now, i want to learn to improve my english skill to become fluent.
    • Please give me some suggestions of o improve mu english skill.

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    • Hello, i’m emily im from Indonesia I want to share my story with you guys about my experience in learning english.
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    • Hello, iI’m eEmily i. I'm from Indonesia
      . I want to share my story with you guys about my experience in learning eEnglish.
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    • Hello, iI’m eEmily im from Indonesia.
      I want to share my       story with you guys about my experience in learning englishEnglish learning experience with you.
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    • Hello, iI’m emily i, I'm from Indonesia.
      I want to share my story with you guys about my experience in learning english.
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    • I loved to learn this language because it was fun for me to be able to speak more than only our mother tongue.
      투표하세요!
    • I loved to learn this language because it was fun for me to be able to speak more than only ourmy mother tongue.
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    • I loved to learn this language because it wais fun for me to be able to speak more than only ourspeak an additional language beside my mother tongue.
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    • I loved to learn this language because it was fun for me to be able to speak more than only ourmy mother tongue.
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    • And the time comes, when i was at the 3rd grade of junior high school, i got a fierce english teacher and was made afraid of her.
      투표하세요!
    • And the time comes, wWhen i was at the 3rd grade of junior high school, iI got a fierce estrict English teacher and was made afraid of her.
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    • And the time comes, wWhen iI was atin the 3rd grade of junior high school, i gotI had a fierce eEnglish teacher and. I was made afraiterrified of her.
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    • And the time comes,once when iI was at the 3rd grade of junior high school, i got a fierce eI had a tyrant (strict) English teacher and was madeI used to afraid of her.
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    • So i became a lazy student to learn english, aftermath my score was below average.
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    • So i became a lazy student ato learn eing English, a. Aftermathwards, my score was below average.
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    • So iI became a lazy student to learn english, aftermath my score was below averageand my score suffers.
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    • So iI became a lazy student toin learn eing English, the aftermath was that my score was below average.
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    • This experience is really giving a huge effect for me, i always have no confidence to speak and write english.
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    • This experience is really gihaving a huge effect for me, ion me. I always have no confidence towhen I speak and write ein English.
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    • This experience is really giving a huge effect for me, i alwayshas a huge effect on me. I have no confidence toin speaking and write englishing.
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    • This experience is really givinghad a huge effect foron me, iI always have no confidence to speak and write eEnglish.
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