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  • Correct this title, please!

    • Can I title my work ” food restrictions in monotheisms” or it would be better ” food restrictions in monotheistic religions”?
    • Or I can better choose ” monotheistic food restrictions” or ”monotheistic dietary restrictions”?

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    • Can I title my work ” food restrictions in monotheisms” or it would be better ” food restrictions in monotheistic religions”?
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    • Can I title my work ” fFood rRestrictions in mMonotheisms” or it would it be better ” food rexpressed as ”Food Restrictions in Monotheistic Religions”?¶

      > The answer is the second wording is better, i.e., ”Food R      estrictions in mMonotheistic rReligions”?.
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    • Or I can better choose ” monotheistic food restrictions” or ”monotheistic dietary restrictions”?
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    • Or I can better choose ” monotheistic food restrictions” or ”monotheistic dietary restrictions”?

      ”monotheistic dietary restrictions” collocates much better.
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    • Or I can better choose ” mwould it be better to go with ”Monotheistic fFood rRestrictions” or ”mMonotheistic dDietary rRestrictions”?

      > Of these two, the latter, i.e., ”Monotheistic Dietary Restrictions”, is better.
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