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    • What would you do if you won or inherited 1.000.000. dollars?
    • Well, let’s go to dream about it.
    • First of all I am starting the investments.
    • And if to be honestly if I won or inherited 1.000.000 dollars I will try not spend it maximum, I will try to do as that the money to work for me.
    • But as far as now i haven’t this money I don’t understand this machinations, so just about investments in different pieces.
    • So if think about it as that I should to spend let’s go to speak about it.
    • So, I would try to be right and choose some part for charity.
    • But must important for me to help my parents, I would do all that I can with their wishes.
    • I will improve their new home.
    • I will to do the repair and to buy the new furniture.
    • I would help to grow them the garden and organise it.
    • I would decide the question of their health and my health and my boyfriend’s health.
    • I would like to help my brother.
  • He is very confused in his life.
    • Perhaps I would to send him to travel, that he have the impossible to understand about word and his place in it.
    • Maybe I paid him the education there where he would to want.
    • I would really try to do all that he need.
    • I really hope that he saw me about it finally.
    • I would like to pay the good clothes for me and my loved ones because more didn’t think about how i look?
    • Especially I should say that it shouldn’t to be very expensive just should be very good and beauty.
    • I would like to do the new teeth because I really sadly about it now.
    • So onward I would rent the workshop for me and my guy, I would cover the rent in the year, and would done our space maximal ourselves and beautiful.
    • We would work there whole year and many improve.
    • I would really live for my important goal for a while.
    • Just to draw and to create and don’t think about: what to eat?
    • What I should to do?
    • We would do the movie that he so want.
    • We paid the people’s work and production with postproduction.
    • After I would plan the trip of the world.
    • I would go in the Asia in Korea and Japan and from there I will go to Latin America and Hawaii.
    • Then I would like to go in Argentina and there I would go to South Pole.
    • I will see on the white shores and polar lights.
    • I will see the emerald water and impossible whales.
    • Later if the money is to be yet, I will buy the flat in Berlin and Venice and very calmness live.
    • The summer and spring I will in Germany but the winter I will in Italy.
    • Sometimes in autumn I will in Italy too or in Russia.
    • In Germany my life will be active and communicate.
    • I will be many collaborations with other artist and to visit at the party.
    • I should will be to develop and to expand the boundaries my mind.
    • Finally I should will be great happy old lady artist which this 1. 000.
    • 000 dollars very helped in her life.
    • Sometimes I will remember about my amazing youth to drink the Prosecco.
    • Very pleasant to think and dream about it.
    • Maybe anything would change if I really have one million dollars.
    • The reality is another unlike the dreams.
    • However when dreams become the goal or many many times to be in the heart something really can happen.

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