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  • Shopping Online vs. Shopping in a Store

  • There are many differences between shopping online and shopping in a store.
    • One difference when you go to the store to the buy anything you are lose the time because you are stand up in line.
    • But when you shop in online will be good for you and don’t lose your time and not need to go many places.
    • Another difference the mall not have all store’s but the online shopping you can pay anything and anywhere all things you need will be to the online shopping.
    • Also, in the shopping in a store will be pay more things not necessary. on the other hand, in online shopping you are will buy just things you need it.
    • Also the online shopping you have many ways to the buy before and after you get your things but the shopping in a store you should pay in the same moment you buy the things.
    • Also in the online shopping you see any styles for anything but the shopping in a store’s you see just many stills the store’s have.
    • Unlike in the online shopping you can pay from anywhere and anytime, in the shopping in a store’s you have specific time and specific places.
    • Finally, in the shopping online you not need to the car but if you go to the store’s you need the car.
    • All in all, you can shop online or in a store but there are many important differences will be online shopping more better.

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    • One difference when you go to the store to the buy anything you are lose the time because you are stand up in line.
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    • One difference is when you go to the store to the buy anything you are lose the time because you are. You need to stand up in line, which costs time.
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    • But when you shop in online will be good for you and don’t lose your time and not need to go many places.
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    • But when you shop in online will be good for you and don’t lose your time and noyou can save time by not having to stand in line and also you don't need to govisit many places.
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    • Another difference the mall not have all store’s but the online shopping you can pay anything and anywhere all things you need will be to the online shopping.
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    • Another difference is the mall may not have all store’s but the online shopping you can pay anything and anywhere all things you need will be to the online shoppingeverything you want, but online shopping will have everything in one store.
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    • Also, in the shopping in a store will be pay more things not necessary. on the other hand, in online shopping you are will buy just things you need it.
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    • Also, in the shopping in a store will be pay more things not necessaryyou will more likely buy more than what you need shopping in a store. oOn the other hand, in online shopping you are will buy just the things you need it.
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    • Also the online shopping you have many ways to the buy before and after you get your things but the shopping in a store you should pay in the same moment you buy the things.
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    • Also thein online shopping you have many ways to the buy before and after you get your things, but the shopping in a store you should pay in the same moment you buy the things.
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    • Also in the online shopping you see any styles for anything but the shopping in a store’s you see just many stills the store’s have.
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    • Also in the online shopping you see many styles for anything but the shopping in a store’s you seewill just many stillssee limited styles that the store’s haves.
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    • Unlike in the online shopping you can pay from anywhere and anytime, in the shopping in a store’s you have specific time and specific places.
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    • Unlike in the online shopping, where you can pay from anywhere and anytime, in the shopping in a store’s you have to pay at that specific time and specific places.
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    • Finally, in the shopping online you not need to the car but if you go to the store’s you need the car.
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    • Finally, in the shopping online you do not need to the car but if you go to the store’s you need the carphysically go to the store. To shop in a store, you need to find a way to go there, whether by car, bus, train, bike, or on foot.
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    • All in all, you can shop online or in a store but there are many important differences will be online shopping more better.
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    • All in all, you can shop online or in a store, but there are many important differences that will bmake online shopping moreseem better.
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