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  • * What is the main risk of buying or borrowing capital to invest in an asset?
  • The main risk of buying capital to invest in an asset is that the asset could lose its value over time.
    • For example, we both share stocks and as an investor in the company’s capital we share ownership of the company thus we also share its risks.
    • If this company’s profit declines our asset would drop in market cost.
  • The main risk of borrowing capital to invest in an asset is that we could not afford to pay off the debt.
    • Since borrowing enables us to invest in an asset without first owning capital, before we paid off the whole debt we not really own an asset.
    • In case our stream of income, such as wages or rental income, declined or even ceased we could not afford to pay off a debt thus we in risk to lost the assent and our previous debt payments.

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    • For example, we both share stocks and as an investor in the company’s capital we share ownership of the company thus we also share its risks.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • For example, we both share stocks andif we have joint share in the stocks, then as an investor in the company’s capital we share ownership of the company thusand we also share its risks.
    • For example, we bothinvest in shares or stocks and ain a company. As an investor in theis company’s capital, we share in its ownership of the companyd thus we also share itsassociated risks.
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    • Since borrowing enables us to invest in an asset without first owning capital, before we paid off the whole debt we not really own an asset.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Since borrowing enables us to invest in an asset without first owning capital, we not really own the asset before we have paid off the whole debt we not really own an asset.
    • Since bBorrowing enables us to invest in an asset without first owning capital, before we paid off the whole debtpossessing the required capital. However, until such debt is completely paid off, we not really own anthis asset.
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    • In case our stream of income, such as wages or rental income, declined or even ceased we could not afford to pay off a debt thus we in risk to lost the assent and our previous debt payments.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • In case, if our stream of income, such as wages or rental income, declineds or even ceaseds, we could not afford to pay off athe debt thus we in risk to lostlosing the assent and our previous debt payments.
    • In the case our stream of incomewhere our income stream, such as wages or rental income, declineds or even ceaseds, we could notmight not be able to afford to paying off such a debt t. Thus, we in risk to lost thelosing such an assent and our previous debt payments.
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