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  • * What are the purposes and uses of assets?
    • The three main uses and purposes of assists are that they can: - Store wealth; - Create income; - Reduce expenses.
    • For example, buying an asset such as an apartment might help us not only store our wealth but also eliminate renting expenses.
    • If one out of its bedrooms given for rent to some student or friend, in such a case, among all, this asset would also generate rental income.
  • * What financial factors should you consider when deciding to borrow capital?
    • When deciding to borrow capital one should consider some financial factors such as: Would this borrowed capital store wealth, increase earnings, or decrease expenses.
    • Would this debt create immediate benefits ether way impossible to get without, or simply, would this debt worth to have.
    • Also, would one be able to cover the debt cost.

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    • The three main uses and purposes of assists are that they can: - Store wealth; - Create income; - Reduce expenses.
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    • The three main uses and purposes of assisets are that they can:¶
      - Store wealth;¶
      - Create income;¶
      - Reduce expenses.
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    • The three main uses and purposes of assisets are that they cano
      - Store wealth;¶
      - Create income;¶
      - Reduce expenses.
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    • For example, buying an asset such as an apartment might help us not only store our wealth but also eliminate renting expenses.
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    • For example, buying an asset such as an apartment might help us not only to store our wealth but also eliminate rentingal expenses.
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    • If one out of its bedrooms given for rent to some student or friend, in such a case, among all, this asset would also generate rental income.
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    • If one out of its bedrooms given for rena bedroom is rented out to some student or friend, in such a case, among all, this asset would also generate rental income.
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    • If one out of its bedrooms is given for rent to somea student or friend, then in such a case, among all, this asset would also generate rental income.
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    • When deciding to borrow capital one should consider some financial factors such as: Would this borrowed capital store wealth, increase earnings, or decrease expenses.
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    • Would this debt create immediate benefits ether way impossible to get without, or simply, would this debt worth to have.
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    • Would this debt create immediate benefits ether way imat's not possible to get without, or simply, would this debt be worth to have.?
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    • Would this debt create immediate benefits eother waywise impossible to get without, or simply, would this debt be worth to have.ing?
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