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    • The financial planning process definitely is a life long process because it always needs to be reviewed and adjusted according to our relevant needs and wants.
    • Thereby while defying and evaluating our financial goals, considering where we are now and how to get where we want to be we should take into account many ”macro” and ”micro” factors that could affect the way we make financial decisions.
    • Such as our age, marital status, existence and number of defendants, our health condition, and our career choice.
    • They all represent the so-called ”micro” or individual factors.
    • Likewise, our financial decisions depend on the state of the economy.
    • Factors such as currency value, economic business cycles, and employment rate also known as ”macro” tend to strongly influence how we manage our money.

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    • The financial planning process definitely is a life long process because it always needs to be reviewed and adjusted according to our relevant needs and wants.
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    • The financial planning process is definitely is a life long process because it always needs to be reviewed and adjusted according to our relevant needs and wants.
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    • The fFinancial planning procesis definitely is a life long process because it always needrequires to be reviewed and adjusted according to our relevant needs and wants.
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    • Thereby while defying and evaluating our financial goals, considering where we are now and how to get where we want to be we should take into account many ”macro” and ”micro” factors that could affect the way we make financial decisions.
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    • Thereby whileWhen defyining and evaluating our financial goals, considering where we are now and how to get where we want to be, we should take into account many ”macro” and ”micro” factors that could affect the way we make financial decisions.
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    • Thereby whileWhen defyining and evaluating our financial goals, considering where we are now and how to get where we want to be we should take into account many ”macro” and ”micro” factors that could affect the way we make our financial decisions.
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    • Such as our age, marital status, existence and number of defendants, our health condition, and our career choice.
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    • Factors such as currency value, economic business cycles, and employment rate also known as ”macro” tend to strongly influence how we manage our money.
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    • Factors such as currency value, economic business cycles, and employment rate, also known as ”macro”economic factors, tend to strongly influence how we manage our money.
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    • Factors such as currency value / rate, economic business cycles, and employment rate also known as ”macro” factors that tend to strongly influence how we manage our money.
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