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    • Siegel and Yacht (2009) stated that there are five elements involved in a process that make any financial plan a good one, namely: -Defining goals; -Assessing the current situation; -Identity choices; -Evaluating choices; - Choose.
    • A financial plan should be regularly reconsidered due to economic and personal changes in our lives.
    • Thus we can be aware of what’s going on with our finances, where to be better to allocate our resources at this particular period of time, and that we still moving toward our financial goals no matter what’s going on in the economy at large.

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