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    • letter for visa department

    • Dear visa department of the Canadian Embassy With this letter I hereby wish to state my interest to apply for a study and work permit.
    • My name is ____, I´m an architect, I have been working in Architectural Project Management for the last 14 years and I specialize in helping companies with create strategies to guarantee the correct manage of their projects I have worked in different areas and companies assuming great challenges and responsibilities which has allowed me to gain experience in all the phases involved in this field.
    • I always had an interest and passion for study and work in other country, and therefore it is not surprising that in 2005 I have participated and successfully complete the Erasmus program in Torino, Italy which lasted 8 months approximately in this program I experienced the exchanged of cultures, learned a new languages it was very enriching For all this reasons, the interest of going back to study abroad was born inside me again.
    • Based on the described experience, thinking about my future career plans, I have decided to invest more time in develop my knowledge.
    • We are in an era in which information, technology and new strategies in the market advance at a dizzying pace.
  • That is why we must never stop learning.
  • Continuous learning is essential to get work done to the next level of efficiency.
    • For this reason I would like to expand my curriculum by studying the Marketing & Management diploma with Co-op offered by the ISS__ which is located in__ The school Designated Learning Institution number: (DLI) ___ The duration of the program will be 96 Week Co-op Program (48 weeks study + 48 weeks work) This is a study program that will help to increased my knowledge about uses of social media in promoting a business or product, and feel more comfortable in verbal interchanges with clients, creating global teams and networks in addition the work experience will allow me to develop my confidence I reiterate that my goal is not to abandon my original profession, but to complement it with increased knowledge that allows develop skills and competencies, and access new job opportunities.
    • I have chosen to study at LCC because it offers the co-op program, I am looking for with a duration of two years, which seems to me an appropriate time to obtain the results that I seek and to continue working on personal projects.
  • In addition, LCC gives me the opportunity to study at very affordable prices.
  • On the other hand, I chose Canada for the following reasons: -The reputation of education in Canada is built on quality and is recognized for excellence throughout the education sector.
  • Canadian titles are of great value around the world.
  • -Curricular value and weight represented by complementing my training in an institution abroad.
    • Therefore, I looked for a place where language and cost were not a problem, Canada is much cheaper than studying in other countries with a good educational level.
    • A Canadian degree is widely recognized as equal to one from the United States, Australia, or the United Kingdom, and Canadian universities and colleges consistently do well in international rankings.
  • -This experience will help me improve my skills and competencies in the English language.
    • -I love hiking and Canada is a country with natural and urban wonders to enjoy in my free time, I know that Canada is a very varied country in terms of the landscapes and has several cities that are worth visiting for their architecture.
    • After finishing my studies, I hope be better able to undertake the decisions necessary to plan and manage a business effectively.
    • Last but not least, during the work period, I will have the opportunity to review my strengths and weaknesses as an employee and later formulate my future plans.
    • To cover my study expenses, I have a bank account in my name, totaling $___ CAD, this money will be used just for my living and studying experience in Canada.
    • I estimate that my expenses for the first year will be around divided as follows: I estimated these expenses taking as reference the official website of the___ I do have more than enough money for the first year as it is required.
    • Finally in 2018 I was able to travel to Canada as a tourist and visited different cities such as Toronto, Ontario (Niagara Falls) On this trip I was able to learn a little about Canadian culture and I realized the kindness of the people which gave me security to be able to apply in a study program.
    • I am completely sure that I will be able to successfully complete my studies.
    • Being able to participate in a co-op program and have the opportunity to put into practice the knowledge acquired in the workplace is my great dream as it will enhance the development of my career.
    • I promise to take my studies with respresponsibility and dedication as I have always done.
    • Without further ado, thank you for your attention and I await your prompt response. Best Regards

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    • Dear visa department of the Canadian Embassy With this letter I hereby wish to state my interest to apply for a study and work permit.
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    • Dear visa department of the Canadian Embassy,
      With this letter I hereby wish to state my interest to apply for a study and work permit.
    • Dear visa department of the Canadian Embassy¶
      With this letter I hereby wish to state my interest
      To whom it may concern,¶

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      to apply for a study and work permit.
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    • My name is ____, I´m an architect, I have been working in Architectural Project Management for the last 14 years and I specialize in helping companies with create strategies to guarantee the correct manage of their projects I have worked in different areas and companies assuming great challenges and responsibilities which has allowed me to gain experience in all the phases involved in this field.
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    • My name is ____,. I´'m an architect,. I have been working in Architectural Project Management for the last 14 years and I specialize in helping companies with createing strategies to guarantee the correct manage of their projects. I have worked in different areas and companies assumfacing great challenges and responsibilities which has allowed me to gain experience in all the phases involved in this field.
    • My name is ____, I´m an architect,. I have been working in Architectural Project Management for the last 14 years and I specialize in helping companies with create strategies to guarantee the correctproper management of their projects. I have worked in different areafields and companies, assuming great challenges and responsibilities which has allowhelped me to gain experience in all the phases involved in this field.
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    • I always had an interest and passion for study and work in other country, and therefore it is not surprising that in 2005 I have participated and successfully complete the Erasmus program in Torino, Italy which lasted 8 months approximately in this program I experienced the exchanged of cultures, learned a new languages it was very enriching For all this reasons, the interest of going back to study abroad was born inside me again.
      Vote now!
    • I always had an interest and passion for study and work in another country, and therefore it is not surprising that in 2005 I have participated and successfully completed the Erasmus program in Torino, Italy which lasted 8 months approximately i8 months. In this program, I experienced the exchanged of cultures, and learned a new languages i. It was very enriching, For all thisof these reasons, the interest of going back to study abroad was born inside me again.
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    • Based on the described experience, thinking about my future career plans, I have decided to invest more time in develop my knowledge.
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    • Based on the described experience, and thinking about my future career plans, I have decided to invest more time in develop myacquiring additional knowledge.
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    • For this reason I would like to expand my curriculum by studying the Marketing & Management diploma with Co-op offered by the ISS__ which is located in__ The school Designated Learning Institution number: (DLI) ___ The duration of the program will be 96 Week Co-op Program (48 weeks study + 48 weeks work) This is a study program that will help to increased my knowledge about uses of social media in promoting a business or product, and feel more comfortable in verbal interchanges with clients, creating global teams and networks in addition the work experience will allow me to develop my confidence I reiterate that my goal is not to abandon my original profession, but to complement it with increased knowledge that allows develop skills and competencies, and access new job opportunities.
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    • For this reason, I would like to expand my curriculum by studying the Marketing & Management diploma with Co-op offered by the ISS__ which is located in__ The school Designated Learning Institution number: (DLI) ___ ¶
      The duration of the program will be 96 Week Co-op Program (48 weeks study + 48 weeks work)
      . This is a study program that will help to increased my knowledge about uses of social media in promoting a business or product, and feel more comfortable in verbal interchanges with clients, creating global teams and networks in addition to the work experience, which will allow me to develop my confidence. I reiterate that my goal is not to abandonto complement my original profession, but to complement it with increased with additional knowledge that allows me to develop skills and competencies, and access new job opportunities.
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    • I have chosen to study at LCC because it offers the co-op program, I am looking for with a duration of two years, which seems to me an appropriate time to obtain the results that I seek and to continue working on personal projects.
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    • I have chosen to study at LCC because it offers the co-op program,. I am looking for withdesire a duration of two years, which iseems to me an appropriate time to obtain the results that I seek and to continue working on personal projects.
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    • On the other hand, I chose Canada for the following reasons: -The reputation of education in Canada is built on quality and is recognized for excellence throughout the education sector.
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    • Therefore, I looked for a place where language and cost were not a problem, Canada is much cheaper than studying in other countries with a good educational level.
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    • Therefore, I lookedsought for a placeschool where language and cost were not a problem,. Canada is much cheaper than studying in other countries withand still offers a good educational level.
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    • A Canadian degree is widely recognized as equal to one from the United States, Australia, or the United Kingdom, and Canadian universities and colleges consistently do well in international rankings.
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    • A Canadian degree is widely recognized as equal to one from the United States, Australia, or the United Kingdom, and. Also, Canadian universities and colleges consistently do well in international rankings.
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    • -I love hiking and Canada is a country with natural and urban wonders to enjoy in my free time, I know that Canada is a very varied country in terms of the landscapes and has several cities that are worth visiting for their architecture.
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    • -I love hiking and Canada is a country with natural and urban wonders to enjoy in my free time,. I know that Canada is a very varied country in terms of the landscapes and has several cities that are worth visiting for their architecture.
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    • After finishing my studies, I hope be better able to undertake the decisions necessary to plan and manage a business effectively.
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    • After finishing my studies, I hope to be better able to undertake the decisions necessary to plan and manage a business effectively.
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    • Last but not least, during the work period, I will have the opportunity to review my strengths and weaknesses as an employee and later formulate my future plans.
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    • Last but not least, during the work period, I will have the opportunity to reviewassess my strengths and weaknesses as an employee and later formulate my future plans based on them.
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    • To cover my study expenses, I have a bank account in my name, totaling $___ CAD, this money will be used just for my living and studying experience in Canada.
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    • To cover my study expenses, I have a bank account in my name, totaling $___ CAD, t. This money will be used just for my living and studying experience in Canada.
    • To cover my study expenses, I have a bank account in my name, totaling $___ CAD, this money will only be used just for my living and studying experience in Canada.
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    • I estimate that my expenses for the first year will be around divided as follows: I estimated these expenses taking as reference the official website of the___ I do have more than enough money for the first year as it is required.
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    • I estimate that my expenses for the first year will be around divided as follows:¶
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    • Finally in 2018 I was able to travel to Canada as a tourist and visited different cities such as Toronto, Ontario (Niagara Falls) On this trip I was able to learn a little about Canadian culture and I realized the kindness of the people which gave me security to be able to apply in a study program.
      Vote now!
    • Finally in 2018, I was able to travel to Canada as a tourist and visited different cities such as Toronto, and Ontario (Niagara Falls). On this trip, I was able to learn a little about Canadian culture and I realized the kindness of the people which gave me security to be able to apply in a study program.
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    • Being able to participate in a co-op program and have the opportunity to put into practice the knowledge acquired in the workplace is my great dream as it will enhance the development of my career.
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    • Being able to participate in a co-op program and have the opportunity to put into practice the knowledge acquired in the workplace is my greultimate dream, as it will enhance the development of my career.
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