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  • A stresfull month

    • Like every year, the month of January is the most stresfull month of the year regarding my job.
    • In fact my colleagues and me are working on meeting the most important deadline of the year : to make the society budget.
    • The changelling things are two: meeting in time deadlines and doing in the correct way, because the society’s investiments depend on the outcome of that.
    • As a consequence, in january we don’t work regularly eight hours, but we work overtime almost every day.
    • Fortunally we are qualified and we are a good team and we can handle the situation well, but in the past, at the begging of my carrer I felt overwhelmed by strict deadlines.

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    • In fact my colleagues and me are working on meeting the most important deadline of the year : to make the society budget.
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    • In fact, my colleagues and meI are working on meeting the most important deadline of the year : to make the society budget.
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    • In fact my colleagues and meI are working on meeting the most important deadline of the year : to make the society's budget.
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    • The changelling things are two: meeting in time deadlines and doing in the correct way, because the society’s investiments depend on the outcome of that.
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    • The changellllenging things are two: meeting in time deadlines and doing in thet correct waly, because the society’'s investiments depend on the outcome of that.
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    • The changelling things are twore are two main challenges: meeting in time deadlines on time and doing it in the correct way, becauseas the society’s investiments depend on the outcome of that.
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    • As a consequence, in january we don’t work regularly eight hours, but we work overtime almost every day.
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    • As a consequence, in jJanuary we don’'t work regularly eight hours, but instead we work overtime almost every day.
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    • As a consequence, in january we don’t workhave regularly eight -hours, but workdays in January: we work overtime almost every day.
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    • As a consequence, in jJanuary we don’t work regularly eight -hours, but we work workdays, but have overtime almost every day.
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    • Fortunally we are qualified and we are a good team and we can handle the situation well, but in the past, at the begging of my carrer I felt overwhelmed by strict deadlines.
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    • Fortunaltely, we are qualified and we are a good team and w. We can handle the situation well, but in the past, at the begginning of my carreer, I felt overwhelmed by strict deadlines.
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    • Fortunally we are qualified and we are a good team and w. We can handle the situation well, b. But, in the past, at the begginning of my carreer, I felt overwhelmed by strict deadlines. ¶
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