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    • I want to tell process of effect people as ı understand it ecpect illness.
    • Maybe ı learn stuff in this process.
    • İts happened curfew and closed store and mall.Commercial life influence extremely bad İn This process.
    • Moreover a lot people be unemployed and a lot store go bankrupt.
    • Commercial life come to the pointof ending wearoff for little store.The rich dont influence like every time as poor this process.
    • I think goverments cover the lost of profit inside help to poor people.
    • Anymore states consist rich people, ı think countries is reason for existence only for rich.We face to face extremely serious problem.
    • But it dosent matter the rulers.
    • There is no warranty of live and food or shelter for usd, This process showed that once again.
    • İt be strange think we get used to this process and we dont see unusually staff.I dont know this situation only my county such as or all other contiries like my country.But ı think this system similar approximately.Be Second this process provide to people face to face themselves.Most people very borring and ı dont want tos tay their home and fight each other.I think a person when he stay alone his house he should spend good time by yourself.Most people cant achieve it as ı see and they began to annoy each other.İt is a lot of shopping to escape from this situation.
    • This is benefit of not people began to continuous buy everthing.

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    • İts happened curfew and closed store and mall.Commercial life influence extremely bad İn This process.
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    • İts happened curfew and closed store and mall.Commercial life influence extremely bad İn TCurfews, store closings, and mall closings have been ordered. Commerce has been badly affected by this process.
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    • İts happenedThere have been curfews and closed stores and mall.Cs. It has affected commercial life influence extremely bad İn This processly.
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    • Commercial life come to the pointof ending wearoff for little store.The rich dont influence like every time as poor this process.
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    • Commercial life come to the pointof ending wearoff for little store.The rich dont influence like every time asis coming to the breaking point for small businesses. The rich are not as greatly affected as the poor by this process.
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    • Anymore states consist rich people, ı think countries is reason for existence only for rich.We face to face extremely serious problem.
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    • Anymore states consist rich people, ı think countries is reason for existence only for rich.We face to face extremelyModern bureaucratic states are in the hands of the wealthy nomenklatura. The power of the state serves those¶
      wealthy people who comprise that nomenklatura. This is a       serious problem for democracy.
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    • İt be strange think we get used to this process and we dont see unusually staff.I dont know this situation only my county such as or all other contiries like my country.But ı think this system similar approximately.Be Second this process provide to people face to face themselves.Most people very borring and ı dont want tos tay their home and fight each other.I think a person when he stay alone his house he should spend good time by yourself.Most people cant achieve it as ı see and they began to annoy each other.İt is a lot of shopping to escape from this situation.
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    • İIt beis strange thinkat we allow ourselves to get used to this process"new normal" and we don't see unusually staff.how it is changing our society. I don't know if this situation only my county such as or allis the case in other countiries like myor only in my own country. But ı think this system similar approximately.Be Second this process provide to people face to face themselves.I suspect that it is similar in all countries. [I don't exactly understand this sentence] ¶
      Most people are very borring and ı don't want tos stay in their home ands fighting each other. I think that a person when heo stays alone his house he should spend goodat home should find a way to have an enjoyable time by yourhimself. Most people who can't achieve ithat, as ıI see and theyit, begain to annoy each other.İt is a lot of Some simply turn to shopping to escape from this situation.
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