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  • Letter of request

    • Hello Mr. Johnson, I am Dick Mosley and I was delighted when I heard that I have been chosen for the position as assistant systems analyst at your company.
    • It is with great regret that I must ask you for a delay of three weeks.
    • My father had a car accident that has incapacitated him.
  • He wants to be independent and he is concerned not to be a burden to me.
    • But we are a very tightly knit family and I feel the obligation to return for some days and arrange home care in order to help him.
  • It would be only natural for you to assume that this could be a recurring problem.
  • Nothing is further from reality.
    • I consider this chance as the job of my life and I am aware how important is for you having a new employee for this position from Mai 1st.
    • To remedy this, I could spend a few unpaid days with a present engineer before I leave.
    • During these days, I would have the opportunity to learn the basic skills and when I start the job, it would be probably easier and faster be skilled in some of the work tasks.
    • I know, it is a hard decision for you and I thank you for your understanding.
    • If you wish to discuss the matter, please don’t hesitate to contact me. Best regards

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