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  • Holiday job

    • Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing regarding the holiday job you offered me last summer.
    • Having just ended my last course at the University, the rationale for encouraging me to work at summer in United Kingdom was to improve my English.
    • I am afraid however, that on this occasion I have to express my unsatisfaction about it.
    • As I was working at your bar, almost no customer was able to speak English with me.
    • Almost every customer was foreign and they were not able to do it properly.
  • I had to be reliant on such other languages like French, Spanish or German.
  • I must urge you to consider finding a solution to this problem as soon as possible Yours sincerely,

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