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  • Essay about how to motivate people to buy local products

    • Today, many local companies and small businesses produce a great amount of various products, but people keep buying goods that are not produced in their region.
  • Changing the situation would empower local businesses and give them financial support for further development.
    • In this essay, two strategies will be discussed that could help to motivate people to buy local.
    • Firstly, changing the way the goods are being advertised could be a big step toward success.
    • If people do not even know what brands that they can see on the shelves are of local production, then it is not surprising that they have no intention to buy them on purpose.
    • However, designing a new concept would take time and, surely, money.
    • The more aspects of the advertising campaign will be changed, the more money will be spent.
  • The second strategy involves reducing prices to gain customers’ respect and loyalty.
    • Local businesses do not have to pay for transporting goods to other regions, so it would not harm them much to cut the prices by 5 or 10 percent.
  • On balance, I believe that both strategies could provide successful solution to the problem.
    • If it is crucial to make a change right here and now, then the second strategy should be used, as it is guaranteed to deliver quick results for the companies.

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    • Today, many local companies and small businesses produce a great amount of various products, but people keep buying goods that are not produced in their region.
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    • If people do not even know what brands that they can see on the shelves are of local production, then it is not surprising that they have no intention to buy them on purpose.
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    • If people do not even know whatich of the brands that they can see on the shelves are of local productionproduced locally, then it is not surprising that they have no intentireason to buy them on purpose.
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    • Local businesses do not have to pay for transporting goods to other regions, so it would not harm them much to cut the prices by 5 or 10 percent.
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    • Local businesses do not have to pay for transportshipping goods to other regions, so it would not harm them much to cut the prices by 5 or 10 percent.
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    • If it is crucial to make a change right here and now, then the second strategy should be used, as it is guaranteed to deliver quick results for the companies.
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    • If it is crucial to make a change right here andright now, then the second strategy should be uchoosed, as it is guaranteed to deliver quick results for the companies. ¶
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