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    • essay about how to motivate people to stop using private cars

    • Nowadays many people contend that too many cars are used in the city center, this resulting in traffic jams and accidents.
  • It is time for the government to change the situation.
    • In this essay I will discuss two possible approaches that can be taken.
  • The first of these is to make people pay more for parking a car in the city center.
    • This may be effective, as no one wants to spent a lot of money on parking, but it must be taken into account that such a measure will only make it more expensive, not less necessary for people to use a car in a center, so many of them may still choose to pay the parking fee.
  • The second approach involves improvement of the public transport system.
  • The aim is to make using public transport as comfortable and convenient as driving a private car.
    • Steps that can be taken to improve the system include: buying modern buses, building a regular schedule, designing a new system of routes and bus stops so that people could get practically anywhere by bus.
    • Not only it will motivate car-owners to stop using cars in the center, but it will also help to increase the quality of life for those who have no car.
    • To conclude, I believe the second approach to be the most efficient, as it will lead to providing a better service to all citizens while enabling some of them to stop using private cars.

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