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  • Dear Dr. x

  • Thank you for your useful explanations.
    • I’m sorry, I could not explain well.
    • I actually wanted to compare two methods of teaching (face to face courses and online courses without physical presence in the classroom and teaching using videos, photos and etc.) on a sport skill such as long badminton service and its effect on high school students participation motivation in physical education class.
    • With the necessity that we are in the age of communication and virtual education is a new need for students today.
    • In addition, because of Covid 19, the need for online and virtual education is more than before.
    • But given your helpful explanations, especially the impossibility of planning on Covid 19, is not it better for me to change the subject?
  • The topic of sport talent identification is one of your favorite researches and I am also interested in it.
  • Do you agree that I work on this subject?
  • If you agree, please give me an idea to work on sport talent.

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    • I actually wanted to compare two methods of teaching (face to face courses and online courses without physical presence in the classroom and teaching using videos, photos and etc.) on a sport skill such as long badminton service and its effect on high school students participation motivation in physical education class.
      투표하세요!
    • I actually wanted to compare two methods of teaching (face to face courses and online courses without physical presence in the classroom and teaching using videos, photos and etc.) on a sport skill such as long badminton service and its effect on high school students' participation and motivation in physical education class.
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    • With the necessity that we are in the age of communication and virtual education is a new need for students today.
      투표하세요!
    • With the necessity thatAs we are in the age of communication and virtual education, this necessity is a new need for students today.
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    • But given your helpful explanations, especially the impossibility of planning on Covid 19, is not it better for me to change the subject?
      투표하세요!
    • But given your helpful explanations, especially the impossibility of planning on Covid OVID-19, is not it better for me to change the subject or not?
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