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  • Why do I want a working permit

  • My wife Sandy is studying now at Community College in Short campus the Business Administrative Executive program that is 3 semesters long.
    • The main reason I am applying for a work permit is that I believe it is very important that we can be together in order to support her both financially and emotionally, so that she can focus on her studies and perform much better, having a healthier and more enriching experience with society.
  • Because I am her husband, it is very important for me to support her in meeting her goals and finishing her study program successfully.
    • Furthermore, in the event of a disease emergency, I think it is important that she can count on someone and that she does not face this situation alone.

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    • My wife Sandy is studying now at Community College in Short campus the Business Administrative Executive program that is 3 semesters long.
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    • The main reason I am applying for a work permit is that I believe it is very important that we can be together in order to support her both financially and emotionally, so that she can focus on her studies and perform much better, having a healthier and more enriching experience with society.
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    • The main reason I am applying for a work permit is that I believe it is very importantso that wei can be together in order to support her bothhelp to provide financially and emotionally, so that she can focus on her studies and perform much better, having a healthier and more enriching experience with society. support for my wife. This way, she can focus on her studies, which will allow her to achieve the best qualification possible.
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    • Because I am her husband, it is very important for me to support her in meeting her goals and finishing her study program successfully.
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    • Furthermore, in the event of a disease emergency, I think it is important that she can count on someone and that she does not face this situation alone.
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    • Furthermore, in the event of a diseasemedical emergency, I think it is important that she can count on someone and that she does not face thise situation alone. ¶
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