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  • 4th dimension for time.

    • Have you ever think what is time?
    • How does it work? Why?
    • So, there is a plenty pile of questions.
    • And sometimes it’s so messy to suck out even a cramp of something that makes a sense.
    • No more water, let’s get in.
    • There are a lot of movies where people travel the time.
    • The future, past.
    • So much of them with identical idea of building the time machine to explore time dimension.
    • And from other side a lot statements of different religions and sacred scripts that tell - there is no time.
    • I was thinking about that for a while on my killing-life-time-and-brain weekends :D and I’ve got an interesting big picture of it, I would like to share it, it’s not a statement just my vision, nothing more.
  • I think there are some dimensions that hold others all together in some kind of mix.
    • To explain it better just imagine 3D figure that was printed out by 3D - printer.
    • This 3D-object combines, at least, 3 dimensions which we can properly get: width, height and length.
  • We can change them.
    • But what if talking about our whole world like about one big figure that combines a lot of dimensions, and one of them is time.
    • Time here it just flows, we can feel it, but we cannot change how it works, however sometimes it’s possible to change the flowing of it.
    • I’m going to explain what I meant just in a minute.
    • When we born and connected to this world we also connected ourselves to the time flowing that starts for us on the particular one point and we stay on it until the day we die.
    • We cannot change start point again, we did it only once, that’s it.
    • Time it’s like a long line segment that has the beginning and the end, on this segment there is everything that all human beings ever had and will have.
    • When we born we stick ourselves right on the chosen time-point and with our life like with a ship sailing through the current, we are captains, moving our coords on this very line segment of time.
    • We can be born on any point of this line segment, it’s why future and past has only meaning when we already born, there were sacred scripts and books that narrate about, but when you’re not sticked onto any of points on that line segment, there is no time or flowing of it.
    • Also there is very interesting thing, that I promised to come back to.
    • Sometimes you can feel that time flows quicker, and sometimes it’s opposite pasts so long, even could be you barely can stand it’s too long.
    • We cannot change the direction of time flowing but in our hand to change the speed.

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    • And from other side a lot statements of different religions and sacred scripts that tell - there is no time.
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    • And from other side a lot of statements of different religions and sacred scripts that tell - there is no time.
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    • And from other side a lot statements ofIn contrast. different religions and sacred scripts that tell -make a lot of statements saying that there is no time.
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    • I was thinking about that for a while on my killing-life-time-and-brain weekends :D and I’ve got an interesting big picture of it, I would like to share it, it’s not a statement just my vision, nothing more.
      투표하세요!
    • I was thinking about that for a while onduring my killing-life-time-and-brain weekends :D and I’ve got an interesting big picture of it,. I would like to share it, i. It’s not a statement but just my vision, nothing more.
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    • But what if talking about our whole world like about one big figure that combines a lot of dimensions, and one of them is time.
      투표하세요!
    • But what if we are talking about our whole world like about one big figure that combines a lot of dimensions, and one of them is time.
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    • Time here it just flows, we can feel it, but we cannot change how it works, however sometimes it’s possible to change the flowing of it.
      투표하세요!
    • Time here it just flows, we can feel it, but we cannot change how it works, however sometimes it’s possible to change the flowing of it.
    • Time here it just flows, w. We can feel it, but we cannot change how it works, h. However, sometimes it’s possible to change the flowing of it.
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    • When we born and connected to this world we also connected ourselves to the time flowing that starts for us on the particular one point and we stay on it until the day we die.
      투표하세요!
    • When we were born and connected to this world, we also connected ourselves to the time flowingflow of time that starts for us on that one particular one point and we stay on it until the day we die.
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    • Time it’s like a long line segment that has the beginning and the end, on this segment there is everything that all human beings ever had and will have.
      투표하세요!
    • Time it’s like a long line segment that has thea beginning and thean end, o. On this segment there is everything that all human beings have ever had, have and will have had.
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    • When we born we stick ourselves right on the chosen time-point and with our life like with a ship sailing through the current, we are captains, moving our coords on this very line segment of time.
      투표하세요!
    • When we are born we stick ourselves right on the chosen time-point and with that our life is like with a ship sailing through thea current, w. We are captains, moving our coordinates on this very line segment of time.
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    • We can be born on any point of this line segment, it’s why future and past has only meaning when we already born, there were sacred scripts and books that narrate about, but when you’re not sticked onto any of points on that line segment, there is no time or flowing of it.
      투표하세요!
    • We can be born on any point of this line segment, it’s why the future and past has only have meaning when we are already born, t. There were sacred scripts and books that narrate about, b this. But when you’re not stiucked onto any of the points on that line segment, there is no time or its flowing of it.
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    • Sometimes you can feel that time flows quicker, and sometimes it’s opposite pasts so long, even could be you barely can stand it’s too long.
      투표하세요!
    • Sometimes you can feel that time flows quicker, and someother times it’s the opposite. Some events in the pasts are so long, even could be you barely can that you can't bare to stand it’s for too long.
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