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  • Essay about Zoos are sometimes seen as necessary but not poor a

  • This is a very important issue because the number of zoos is rising and because the lives of some spices of animals are facing the threat of the extinction.
  • However, I believe animals should live free in the wild and not held in captivity.
  • First, keeping animals in zoos would harm their behavior nature, for example a tiger needs a huge space to adopt and teach their cub how to hunt and protect himself in order to survive, and by keeping him in a cage would definitely kill his skills.
  • It is not fair to take animals from their mother nature and keep them in small enclosures, in order to visit them on weekends to see them.
  • Finally, due to hunting animals from the wild would effect a misbalance in the spices of the animals and moreover they would extinct , for example hunting snakes and keeping them in the zoos would harm the corns by the rats, which would effect the economy of the country.
  • In conclusion, animals should live free in the wild and should not be kept in the zoos in order to bring balance to nature and save them from the extinction.

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    • This is a very important issue because the number of zoos is rising and because the lives of some spices of animals are facing the threat of the extinction.
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    • First, keeping animals in zoos would harm their behavior nature, for example a tiger needs a huge space to adopt and teach their cub how to hunt and protect himself in order to survive, and by keeping him in a cage would definitely kill his skills.
      Stem nu!
    • Tilføj en ny rettelse! - Sætning 3Tilføj en ny rettelse! - Sætning 3
  • Sætning 4
    • It is not fair to take animals from their mother nature and keep them in small enclosures, in order to visit them on weekends to see them.
      Stem nu!
    • Tilføj en ny rettelse! - Sætning 4Tilføj en ny rettelse! - Sætning 4
  • Sætning 5
    • Finally, due to hunting animals from the wild would effect a misbalance in the spices of the animals and moreover they would extinct , for example hunting snakes and keeping them in the zoos would harm the corns by the rats, which would effect the economy of the country.
      Stem nu!
    • Tilføj en ny rettelse! - Sætning 5Tilføj en ny rettelse! - Sætning 5
  • Sætning 6
    • In conclusion, animals should live free in the wild and should not be kept in the zoos in order to bring balance to nature and save them from the extinction.
      Stem nu!
    • Tilføj en ny rettelse! - Sætning 6Tilføj en ny rettelse! - Sætning 6