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  • Random rambling about random rambling. You’ll get the idea.

  • I need to start writing my journals in English I suppose.
    • I’d like to reach the fluency in speaking English.
    • To achieve that goal I’ll write in English for some time and the main rule is that I don’t correct myself.
    • I’m not doing any edits no corrections, nothing.
  • I’m writing as I think in real time, because I think it’s the way I’d speak.
    • I want to know what mistakes I am making, and what are my speaking (thinking?) habits and patterns to improve on them.
  • If I wasn’t writing as I think and without corrections I wouldn’t know which parts of my skills I need to improve.
    • Also if I would correct myself I wouldn’t know if there is a better way to say something (that part I don’t know if I can explain clearly).
  • And of course there are going to be mistakes which are simply due to the fact that I’m not structuring my speech and I’m just trying to think things out of a top of my head but it really doesn’t matter from my point of view.
  • What I need to do after this exercise is to give this text to someone, it would be best if that would be a native speaker, to get a comprehensive review of it and suggestions where I can make improvements as well as what parts don’t sound natural.
    • I remember Iggy said to me, that I could use more of ”linking words” (I don’t remember the name) for example rather than using ”but” all the time try to use ”although” or ”however”.
    • What I feel I have the most problem with is just grammar.
    • That’s something I could learn just from the book although (wink wink) when I try to do that I don’t know where to start and sometimes I’m just getting bored because I feel like I know most of the stuff, which obviously is not true.
    • Despite that fact I could use knowledge of which particular pieces of grammar I lack to improve on particular topic, which won’t be so dull and boring for me (because it would be something that I know I have problem with).
    • The main problem with those texts I’m trying to write is, that I’m not exercising the way of speaking about past or future.
    • I’m just spilling facts and opinions which doesn’t lead to use complex grammar structures or anything.
  • I don’t really know.
  • Anyway, I think that would be just enough to get some feedback and serve as a sample of my speech (or writing).
  • If someone’s reading this - thank you for your help.
  • Have a good day : )

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    • To achieve that goal I’ll write in English for some time and the main rule is that I don’t correct myself.
      투표하세요!
    • To achieve that goal,
      I’ll write in English for some time and the main rule is that I don’t correct myself.
      AussieInBgAussieInBg profile picture 댓글
      투표하세요!
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    • I want to know what mistakes I am making, and what are my speaking (thinking?) habits and patterns to improve on them.
      투표하세요!
    • I want to know what mistakes I am making, and what are my speaking (thinking?) habits and patterns so as to improve on them.
      AussieInBgAussieInBg profile picture 댓글
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6
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    • If I wasn’t writing as I think and without corrections I wouldn’t know which parts of my skills I need to improve.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7
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    • Also if I would correct myself I wouldn’t know if there is a better way to say something (that part I don’t know if I can explain clearly).
      투표하세요!
    • Also if I would correct myself then I wouldn’t know if there is a better way to say something (that part I don’t know if I can explain clearly).
      AussieInBgAussieInBg profile picture 댓글
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 8
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    • And of course there are going to be mistakes which are simply due to the fact that I’m not structuring my speech and I’m just trying to think things out of a top of my head but it really doesn’t matter from my point of view.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 9
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    • What I need to do after this exercise is to give this text to someone, it would be best if that would be a native speaker, to get a comprehensive review of it and suggestions where I can make improvements as well as what parts don’t sound natural.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 10
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    • I remember Iggy said to me, that I could use more of ”linking words” (I don’t remember the name) for example rather than using ”but” all the time try to use ”although” or ”however”.
      투표하세요!
    • I remember Iggy said to me, that I could use more of ”linking words” (I don’t remember the name) f. For example, rather than using
      ”but” all the time tryhen instead trying to use ”although” or ”however”.
      AussieInBgAussieInBg profile picture 댓글 1
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 11
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    • That’s something I could learn just from the book although (wink wink) when I try to do that I don’t know where to start and sometimes I’m just getting bored because I feel like I know most of the stuff, which obviously is not true.
      투표하세요!
    • That’s something I could learn just from the book although (wink wink) w. When I try to do that I don’t know where to start and s. Sometimes I’m just getting bored because I feel like I know most of the stuff, which obviously is not true.
      AussieInBgAussieInBg profile picture 댓글 1
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 13ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 13
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    • Despite that fact I could use knowledge of which particular pieces of grammar I lack to improve on particular topic, which won’t be so dull and boring for me (because it would be something that I know I have problem with).
      투표하세요!
    • Despite that fact I could use knowledge of which particular pieces of grammar I lack to improve on a particular topic, which won’t be so dull and boring for me (because it would be something that I know I have a problem with).
      AussieInBgAussieInBg profile picture 댓글 1
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 14ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 14
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    • The main problem with those texts I’m trying to write is, that I’m not exercising the way of speaking about past or future.
      투표하세요!
    • The main problem with those texts I’m trying to write is, that I’m not exercising the way of speaking about past or future.
      AussieInBgAussieInBg profile picture 댓글 1
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 15ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 15
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