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short essay:Are you pretending?
I want to be happy, so I always show my smile to pretend I am so happy.
But in fact, I always cry when I am alone.
I want to be confidence,so I always be sure of myself to pretend I am so confidence.
But in fact, i always doubt myself when I am alone.
But in fact, I always feel scread when I am alone.
I feel exhausted,I want to cry but can't be found by the others.
- http://www.yinyuetai.com/video/187419

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- short essay:Are you pretending?
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Setning 1
- I want to be happy, so I always show my smile to pretend I am so happy.
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Setning 2
- But in fact, I always cry when I am alone.
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Setning 3
- I want to be confidence,so I always be sure of myself to pretend I am so confidence.
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Setning 4
- But in fact, i always doubt myself when I am alone.
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Setning 5
- But in fact, I always feel scread when I am alone.
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Setning 6
- I feel exhausted,I want to cry but can't be found by the others.
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Setning 7
- http://www.yinyuetai.com/video/187419
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