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  • Dear Customer Care Hiring Team

    • Dear Customer Care Hiring Team, as a student of logistics management with an international background and a customer service experience I am highly interested in the Customer Care Internship position.
    • I am truly inspired by the philosophy and values of the XXX company and would love to learn more about the industry.
    • Before I started my study in the logistics field I had a chance to work in a travel industry while I was on the way to get my first university degree in tourism management.
    • I did my best to provide an excellent service and took a lot of responsibility.
  • I developed my communication skills, empathy, patience and stress resilience.
    • As a travel agent and a front desk agent I had to be attentive to the details, take quick decisions and be assured that my customers will experience only positive emotions.
    • I am always willing to learn and not afraid of the new challenges, so soon after my graduation I decided to obtain another academic degree in Germany.
    • I find global supply chains fascinating and want to be a part of this dynamic and innovative world, being able to interact with different departments, improve processes and make a difference to the planet while keeping a customer satisfied.
  • Living in another country has taught me to be independent, self-organized and to have a proactive lifestyle.
  • I easily adapt to new circumstances and enjoy being in a multicultural environment.
    • On top of that, I am a confident MS Office user and by the end of the current semester will be familiar with the SAP Software.
    • I can’t wait to apply the knowledge and skills that I have gained from my studies into practice.
    • I hope to get a chance to contribute to the company by providing a meaningful support to the team and get a valuable experience from the internship.
    • I am available for a full-time internship starting in April 2021 for up to 6 months.
  • Thank you for considering my application.
  • Please feel free to contact me if you need any additional information.
    • I would be happy to introduce myself and to discuss further questions in a personal interview.
    • Sincerely, XXX

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    • Dear Customer Care Hiring Team, as a student of logistics management with an international background and a customer service experience I am highly interested in the Customer Care Internship position.
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    • Dear Customer Care Hiring Team,

      aAs a student ofin logistics management with an international background and a customer service experience, I am highly interested in theyour Customer Care Iinternship position.
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    • I am truly inspired by the philosophy and values of the XXX company and would love to learn more about the industry.
      투표하세요!
    • I am truly inspired by the philosophy and values of the XXX companyXXX and would love to learn more about the industrlogistics and management at your company.
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    • Before I started my study in the logistics field I had a chance to work in a travel industry while I was on the way to get my first university degree in tourism management.
      투표하세요!
    • Before I started my study in the logistics field, I had a chancen opportunity to work in athe travel industry while I was on the way to getundertaking my first university degree in tourism management.
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    • As a travel agent and a front desk agent I had to be attentive to the details, take quick decisions and be assured that my customers will experience only positive emotions.
      투표하세요!
    • As a travel agent and and front desk agent, I had to be attentive to the details, tmake quick decisions and be assured that my customers will experience only positive emotionsould be happy with the service.
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    • I am always willing to learn and not afraid of the new challenges, so soon after my graduation I decided to obtain another academic degree in Germany.
      투표하세요!
    • I am always willing to learn and not afraid of the new challenges, so. So, soon after my graduation, I decided to obtain another academic degree in Germany.
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    • I find global supply chains fascinating and want to be a part of this dynamic and innovative world, being able to interact with different departments, improve processes and make a difference to the planet while keeping a customer satisfied.
      투표하세요!
    • I find global supply chains fascinating and want to be a part of this dynamic and innovative world, being able to interact with different departments, improve processes and make a difference to the planet while at the same time keeping a customers satisfied.
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    • On top of that, I am a confident MS Office user and by the end of the current semester will be familiar with the SAP Software.
      투표하세요!
    • OIn top of that, I am a confidaddition, I am a highly proficient MS Office user and b. By the end of the current semester, I will also be familiar with the SAP SoftwareSAP.
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    • I can’t wait to apply the knowledge and skills that I have gained from my studies into practice.
      투표하세요!
    • I can’t wait to applyam eager to put into practice the knowledge and skills that I have gained from my studies into practice.
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    • I hope to get a chance to contribute to the company by providing a meaningful support to the team and get a valuable experience from the internship.
      투표하세요!
    • I hope to get a chance to contribute to the company by providing a meaningful support to the team and get aobtain valuable experience from theyour internship.
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