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  • Personal presentation

    • I lived differents experiencies in quality issues with customers.
    • One with the customer XXX wich is a big petrochemical company.
    • We had a claim about leaks on five valves on the main oven of the plant.
    • It was a critical issue because the refinery could be stopped.
    • It could cost millions euros of production loss.
    • We have to explain at the customer with every proofs that we did the job well, we respected standard practices to repare and mount valves.
    • Two other causes were picked: the dimensions of the seal supply by a supplier and the restart of the production in water and pressure wouldn’t do at the right time.
    • Containement action was to block definitively valves and replace it with by bypassing.
    • So, the enquiries went over, did’nt go further because it was impossible to look in the valves because the production couldn’t be stopped.
    • The other one was a claim about a leak on a massive seven tons valve installed on an aeronautic test blower in customer site.
    • I led an analyse Hishikawa to find root causes of the issue.
    • As well, I manage to Lean management projects about implementing 5S, kaizen and Value Stream Mapping I had severals experiencies in certification ISO.
    • I led four projects for certifications ISO, 5 to obtain MASE and severals certifications Marc Center and ATEX.
    • Finally, I was in charge in both companies of implementing, setting up, and manage metrology equipments systems.

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    • We have to explain at the customer with every proofs that we did the job well, we respected standard practices to repare and mount valves.
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    • We haved to explain ato the customer with every proofsall the proof we had that we did the job well, we respected standard practices to repaire and mount the valves.
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    • Two other causes were picked: the dimensions of the seal supply by a supplier and the restart of the production in water and pressure wouldn’t do at the right time.
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    • Two other causes were pickedossible: the dimensions of the seal supplyied by a supplier and that at the restart of the production, in water and pressure wouldn’t do at the right tiflow and applied pressure were not correctly performed.
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    • So, the enquiries went over, did’nt go further because it was impossible to look in the valves because the production couldn’t be stopped.
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    • So, the enquiries went over, did’nt goy didn't proceed further because it was impossible to look inside the valves to ascertain the problem because the production cwouldn’t have been stopped.
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    • The other one was a claim about a leak on a massive seven tons valve installed on an aeronautic test blower in customer site.
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    • The other one was a claim about a leak onfrom a massive seven tons valve installed on an aeronautic test blower inat the customer site.
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    • As well, I manage to Lean management projects about implementing 5S, kaizen and Value Stream Mapping I had severals experiencies in certification ISO.
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    • As well, I manage to Lean management projects aboutfor implementing 5S, kKaizen and Vvalue Sstream Mmapping.
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      d severalsve had experienciese in certification ISO.
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    • I led four projects for certifications ISO, 5 to obtain MASE and severals certifications Marc Center and ATEX.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • I have led four projects for certifications ISO, 5 to obtain MASE and severalsthe certifications Marc Center and ATEX.
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    • Finally, I was in charge in both companies of implementing, setting up, and manage metrology equipments systems.
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    • Finally, I was in charge in both companies of implementing, setting up, and manageing meteorology equipments systems.
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