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- In my cursus, I did quality then safety and last few years, equipments and infrastructures management had added.
- I worked in manufacturers companies then in maintenance companies, more in service delivery.
- My main missions were to get certifications, working on quality insurance and implementing ERP’s.

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句子 1
- In my cursus, I did quality then safety and last few years, equipments and infrastructures management had added.
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- ~~In my cursus, I di~~As per my CV, I have performed quality control then safety man~~d last few years,~~agement. During the last few years, I have also worked in equipments and infrastructures management ~~had added~~.
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- I worked in manufacturers companies then in maintenance companies, more in service delivery.
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- I have worked in manufactur~~ers~~ing companies then in maintenance companies, ~~more~~primarily in service delivery.
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- My main missions were to get certifications, working on quality insurance and implementing ERP’s.
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- My main missions were ~~to get~~for certifications, working on quality insurance and implementing ERP’s.
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