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Text from Christina2207 - English

  • Hey guys! I am launching a product

  • Hey everyone!
    • I am launching a product and need some help with bullets and description.
    • Was a bit confused how to correlate the keywords (in brackets) with the text.
    • Will be happy to get some suggestions!
  • Thank you in advance!
    • • LIMITED WINTER EDITION: If you want to see a smile spread across the faces of your loved one, show value of relationship that you both share with (brand name).
    • Let them have an elegant round cup filled with hot chocolate, feel a sense of deliciously soft, fuzzy socks, and get some refreshing nap with specially- made to slip’s exacting standards sleep mask.
    • • IDEAL CHOICE: When words are not enough, this (gift set) might help.
    • Beautiful in its simplicity items combination is the perfect pick for every occasion, whether it is a gift for anniversary, (get well soon gift for women) or girl, (expecting mom gift) or (50th birthday) present • HURRY UP to have this exclusive basket for JUST (price)$ during winter time.
  • Give it as a (quarantine gift, coworker gift for women or thinking of you gift, birthday gift for friend or even as a divorce gift.) • PICK A GIFT BETTER THAN SANTA: The lucky lady in your life deserves the best.
  • Regardless if you’re shopping for get (well gifts for women after surgery, inspirational thank you encouragement coworker gifts), this (gift basket for her) will steal the show (and her heart).
    • • IF YOU ARE’T SATISFIED, YOU DON’T HAVE TO PAY.
    • We having no doubt you will love (brand name) care package, therefore, and if for any reason you feel that our product did not live up to your expectations-no questions asked, you may request a refund for any reason.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • • LIMITED WINTER EDITION: If you want to see a smile spread across the faces of your loved one, show value of relationship that you both share with (brand name).
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    • • LIMITED WINTER EDITION: If you want to seedraw a smile spread acrosson the faces of your loved one, show off the value of the relationship that you both sharve with (brand name).
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  • Sentence 7
    • Let them have an elegant round cup filled with hot chocolate, feel a sense of deliciously soft, fuzzy socks, and get some refreshing nap with specially- made to slip’s exacting standards sleep mask.
      Vote now!
    • Let them have an elegant round cup filled with hot chocolate, feel a sense of deliciously tempting cup of hot chocolate, feel the touch of soft, fuzzy socks, and get somea refreshing nap with a sleep mask specifically- made to slip’s exacting standards sleep mask designed in accordance with the highest standards.
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    • Let them have an elegant round cup filled with hot chocolate, feel a sense of deliciously cup of delicious hot chocolate, wear soft, fuzzy socks, and get somea refreshing nap with specially- made to slip’s exacting standardscovering your eyes with our comfortable sleeping mask.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 7
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    • Beautiful in its simplicity items combination is the perfect pick for every occasion, whether it is a gift for anniversary, (get well soon gift for women) or girl, (expecting mom gift) or (50th birthday) present • HURRY UP to have this exclusive basket for JUST (price)$ during winter time.
      Vote now!
    • Beautiful infor its simplicity itemse combination of items, it is the perfect pick for every occasion, whether it is a gift for an anniversary, (get well soon gift for women) or girl, (expecting mom gift) or (50th birthday) present¶
      • HURRY UP       to haveand get this exclusive basket for JUST (price)$ during winter time.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 9
  • Sentence 10
    • Give it as a (quarantine gift, coworker gift for women or thinking of you gift, birthday gift for friend or even as a divorce gift.) • PICK A GIFT BETTER THAN SANTA: The lucky lady in your life deserves the best.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 10
  • Sentence 11
    • Regardless if you’re shopping for get (well gifts for women after surgery, inspirational thank you encouragement coworker gifts), this (gift basket for her) will steal the show (and her heart).
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 11
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    • We having no doubt you will love (brand name) care package, therefore, and if for any reason you feel that our product did not live up to your expectations-no questions asked, you may request a refund for any reason.
      Vote now!
    • We having no doubare certain that you will love (brand name) care package, therefore, and if for any reason you feel that our product did not live up to your expectations-no questions asked, you maycan request a full refund for any reason, no questions asked. ¶
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