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  • My Master Journey

    • Five years ago I had to move to Riyadh to finish my master’s degree.
    • It was my first leaving home experience.
    • First, I was scared I had adaptation problems with all my new responsibilities and the studying challenges, especially when I didn’t make any friends and that is so important to me because of my social personality by natural.
    • In my opinion, the cause of didn’t make any friendship is that everybody in my class was so serious and competed about studying they were stressed all the time.
    • After one year of struggling I met a nice girl outside the campus, we chat and we found a lot of things in common we became friends eventually.
    • After two years, unfortunately, I started to like the new city with all its high building and bustling life I loved it actually and started to think about moving there, In fact, I did that after I met my husband and we get married last year then I moved to live with him in Riyadh.
    • In the end, I would like to say not every big change in our lives is scary sometimes we have to give it a chance and we will use to it and it will get better.

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    • First, I was scared I had adaptation problems with all my new responsibilities and the studying challenges, especially when I didn’t make any friends and that is so important to me because of my social personality by natural.
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    • First, I was scared I had adaptation problemsbecause I had problems adapting with all my new responsibilities and the studying challenges,. It was especially bad when I didn’t make any friends and that, which is so important to me because of mI'm a naturally social personality by natural.
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    • In my opinion, the cause of didn’t make any friendship is that everybody in my class was so serious and competed about studying they were stressed all the time.
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    • In my opinion, the cause of didn’not makeing any friendships is that everybody in my class was so serious and competed. They were competing so much about studying that they were stressed all the time.
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    • After one year of struggling I met a nice girl outside the campus, we chat and we found a lot of things in common we became friends eventually.
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    • After one year of struggling, I met a nice girl outside the campus, w. We chat and we found a lot of things in common. Eventually, we became friends eventually.
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    • After two years, unfortunately, I started to like the new city with all its high building and bustling life I loved it actually and started to think about moving there, In fact, I did that after I met my husband and we get married last year then I moved to live with him in Riyadh.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • After two years, unfortunately, I started to like the new city with all its high buildings and bustling life. I loved it actually and started to think about moving there,. In fact, I did that after I met my husband and w. We geot married last year and then I moved to live with him in Riyadh.
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    • In the end, I would like to say not every big change in our lives is scary sometimes we have to give it a chance and we will use to it and it will get better.
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    • In the end, I would like to say that not every big change in our lives is scary s. Sometimes we have to give it a chance and w. We will use to it and ithings will get better. ¶
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