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    • what would you do if you won or inherited 1.000.000. dollars?

    • what would you do if you won or inherited 1.000.000. dollars?
    • First, let’s discuss the fact: generally, I wouldn’t waste money.
    • I would try to arrange everything so that the money worked for me as much as possible.
    • I would choose the first goal to improve my financial literacy and my financial portfolio.
    • Maybe if not the main part then I would not spend most of the money.
    • I would probably decide this: spend 10-20 percent of everything.
    • With the rest of the money, I would sit and fink for a long time))).
  • This is where my essay would end))).
    • But, if we change the question like this: where would I spend a million dollars?
    • If it was necessary to spend everything.
    • In general, then, in fact this is a lot and not too much at all as.
    • If you talk about big money, great opportunities immediately appear.
    • Everything must be carefully weighed and distributed in proportion to the main goals:
personal and creative growth, improving the standard of living, taking care of appearance and health, the impressions, the dreams.
    • The Debts and the responsibilities.
    • First of all, I would do this: I want my parents not to need anything.
    • They are very fragile and the financial instability of our country’s pensioners oppresses them.
    • Recently they made their dream come true, but to bring it to the end a lot to invest.
  • I would do anything for this.
  • I would create a perfect world for them.
    • Further, I would spend to completely close health questions of myself and my loved ones.
    • It is important to know what is happening to your body.
    • From the basic one more: I would create a completely wardrobe that suits me in order to be calm about the appearance.
    • I would not be wasted on expensive brands, but just comfortable beautiful quality things.
    • because it is important to feel neat and beautiful.
    • And now, the most important and extensive block: In fact, I would really like to think over as much as possible my creative realization.
    • The workspace organization, in essentially a workshop, but a little wider.
    • This should be a space with huge bright windows with perfect views, the high ceilings.
    • I have to think over it perfectly and equip it, both the architectural part and the interior.
    • The emerald and cold shades.
    • and the possibility of exhibition space.
    • I would like to go on a trip around the world.
    • from Vladivostok by ferry traveling to Korea from there to Japan, then to live for half a year small Asian countries.
    • From Asia to America, through Hawaii.
    • And further down the continent, a long journey through Latin America.
    • And of course to the South Pole via Antarctica.
  • I would like to go to study for a year or two at the best art institutes in order to expand my understanding of the profession.
    • I would invest in my boyfriend’s films and help him with everything.
    • we would do everything and try very hard.
    • and in general, I would buy an apartment in venice.
    • maybe the money has already run out) and the apartment can be a good investment, although ...
    • Venice is sinking ...))) I would come there in the winter in theemerald coat, look at the aqua-alta, and by the age of 50-60 I would have stayed there - walk as well-groomed old woman with a white greyhound dog.
    • there would be a Bengal cat at home.
    • and I would just go to the film festival and invited openings, with my husband.
    • and we would sit in Venice.
    • only when it’s hot - are leaving for an old Moscow apartment - remember our youth.

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