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  • If I win 1000000 $

  • Sorry, the text is so big.
    • It’s my task to write a text of at least 600 words There is a rumor If you want to help another, you must first help yourself.
    • So, if I have a million, I will first let part of it for my own good.
    • If I receive a million dollars, I will definitely put aside some of the money as a safety cushion.
    • There is a rumor it is approximately 6Xmonthly income.
    • I will save some of the money for my health, I will undergo a course of psychotherapy, I will take care of my teeth and skin.
  • I will invest part of the money in my education.
  • I wish so much to get to masterclasses with many athletes and dancers.
    • Some of them live in other countries, so travel also needs money.
    • I would definitely learn financial literacy and investment.
  • I would fill another big gap - sales.
    • I need to learn how to sell.
    • So strange, I need money to learn how to make money.
  • I will spend part of the money on equipment, I’ll buy a new laptop, a tablet for digital graphics, a new phone, a tripod and a lens for my camera.
  • I will be trained as an art therapist I will try to open my own business; it will be either a shop or my art studio.
  • So I will buy a spacious, warm, bright workshop in the city center I organize a studio where you can feel freedom in creativity for a while.
  • I want to teach people not just to draw, I want to teach them to listen to themselves.
    • I want them to feel that it is possible to acquire the knowledge they need without being instructed or following strict rules.
    • my students do not need to think about how it is right or wrong, how not to stain your hands, floor, walls, or clothes with paint.
    • All materials and surfaces in the studio are intended to be painted, painted, pasted over, and stained with their ideas by my guests.
  • References, music, films, tea/coffee with treats, lack of a competitive atmosphere, and moral support from teachers will contribute to the creative flight I want to share with my students the pleasure of creating art.
  • Together we will learn how to go from a fleeting idea to its visual embodiment.
  • I will update my wardrobe with high-quality and comfortable clothes.
  • I want it to last me a long time and to be pleasant and comfortable for my body.
    • I will finally go for massages so that intense training does not affect my well-being so much.
    • I will help my family financially; they will pay off their debts.
    • I will take care of their traveling where they have wanted to go I will definitely go to Italy, Great Britain and the ocean.
  • I will invest some of my money in stocks and real estate I will go to India and learn Vipassana there.
  • Vipassana means seeing things as they really are, is one of the oldest meditation techniques in India.
  • I will rent a license and buy a car I will buy a house by the sea or in the mountains for myself and my family.
  • Perhaps by this time, that million I initially got will have ended, but my investments will make themselves felt.
  • I will equip my house and build a family hearth.
  • I will be doing creative work, housekeepers will help me around the house.
  • I will stand firmly on my feet, will give birth to beautiful children from my wonderful husband (while I was writing it rainbow ponies jumped around me).
  • I will try to raise my children healthy and happy.
  • I will find a good school for them and will try to develop their talents.

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