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  • Theme: Origin of Life

    • There are two mainstream theories about the origin of life: the evolution theory and the alien theory.
    • The second one believes that first alive organisms had became from space and landed on Earth in a meteorite, and the first one states that these first alive organisms had always belonged to Earth.
    • Although, both of them agree with the evolution of these first alive organisms to complex plants and animals, came from space or not.
    • Therefore, it’s already proved by science that it took millions of years to evolution of life acchive human race complexity and it’s amazing.
    • Besides the awesome evolution process that brought us here, the tiny possibility of belonging to a long line of alien’s linage is also really cool.

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    • The second one believes that first alive organisms had became from space and landed on Earth in a meteorite, and the first one states that these first alive organisms had always belonged to Earth.
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    • The second one believeasserts that the first alive organisms had be came from space and landed on Earth in a meteorite, and the first one states that these first alive organisms had always belongoriginated ton Earth.
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    • The second one believtheory states that the first aliveing organisms had becacome from space and landed on Earth in a meteorite, ands whereas the first one stateis that these first alive organisms had always belongwere initially generated ton Earth.
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    • Although, both of them agree with the evolution of these first alive organisms to complex plants and animals, came from space or not.
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    • Although, both of themProponents of both theories agree withon the evolution of these first alive organisms to complex plants and animals, whether they came from space or not.
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    • Although, both of them agree with the evolution ofBoth theories agree that these first aliveing organisms evolved into complex plants and animals, came from space or not. However, these theories disagree on their initial origins.
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    • Therefore, it’s already proved by science that it took millions of years to evolution of life acchive human race complexity and it’s amazing.
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    • Therefore, it’s alreadyIt has been proved by science that ithe complexity of human life took millions of years tof evolution tof life acchieve human race complexity and it’and I find this amazing.
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    • Therefore, it’s already proved by sci is overwhelming evidence that it took millions of years to evolution of life acchive human race complexity and ifor life to evolve into the complexity of the human race. It’s amazing.!
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    • Besides the awesome evolution process that brought us here, the tiny possibility of belonging to a long line of alien’s linage is also really cool.
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    • Besides the awesome evolution process that brought us here, the tiny possibility of belonging to a long line of alien’s linageing descended from aliens is also really cool.
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    • Besides the awesome evolutionary processes that brought us here, the tiny possibility of belonging to a long linage of alien’s linages is also really cool.
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